|Reviews for I Heard The World|
| HE-SpecOps chapter 18 . 11/10/2014
Your story is awesome. Lots of things make it better than canon, and only a few make it bad.
In "bad", it's that Lelouch is even more of a wimp than Suzaku in canon, while he wasn't alone for seven years. It means that C.C. and orange screwed up (and that is blasphemy). Kaguya is also a bit too much of a tyran toward Lelouch (unless she acts that way because she sees that he wants penance and flees being responsible of anything, if that's the case, don't put the explanation with her POW too early)
The OCs are weird. You were really good in reinventing nearly all the cast (gino, kewel and the female knights of round are the only ones that felt weird) but the new european and russian ones lack depth (screentime, really, but until that chapter they were really council of ominous vagueness. Tropes are not bad but it wasn't the greatest strength of Code Geass in the begining)
The plot -nothing to say. Awesome. Original. Keeps the feeling but creates a new story. Not one monolitic enemy but many factions.
The shout-out and cameo are mixed i'd say. I truly wanted to see Onizuka again after his cameo, but the product placement coming in waves broke the WSOD along with the fourth wall (alley fighter 4, really ?)
There is something as overkill if it overkills your story.
And i can't imagine Luciano Bradley as anything but the joker (without make up) especially at the end of 18.
| SoaringEagle13 chapter 18 . 10/15/2014
Really loving this so far. I hope this fic is still alive. I really want to know what happens next.
| Eclipse130 chapter 4 . 10/7/2014
-dies of laughter- oh gosh the Alfred to jos batman!
| Ruinous Crow chapter 18 . 10/2/2014
It's been quite a while since you last updated, and I understand life and lack of motivation, but I was wondering if it might be possible to post your plans for this story if it is indeed abandoned? I must admit I'm dying to know what happened in Lelouch's and Suzaku's past.
| Siyavash chapter 18 . 9/29/2014
Waaaah! Not only abandoned but abandoned on a cliffhanger!
Really wish you would return to this story.
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 16 . 9/23/2014
So in your mind regardless of which side Lelouch is on he is always in the right and Suzaku is always wrong?
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/13/2014
I loved this fic, so bad you seem to hace dropped it... :(
| mfmxxx chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Very good for an AU so far. only thing Im so so on atm is Euphie being a code bearer.
| Mrbiq chapter 18 . 3/6/2014
Aaah! Cliff hanger...
"Lelouch vi Brittania..." Shirley whispered-
Urk. Bet Lelouch was choking at that moment.
| Prof. Omnom chapter 18 . 2/17/2014
How dead is this story on a scale of one to hopes and dreams of children?
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 13 . 2/2/2014
Dude we get it, you know about giant robot anime. You don't need to convince us anymore.
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 4 . 2/2/2014
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god the g-gundam reference caught me off guard, you're story is amazing dude.
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
So Suzaku is using a super robot in a real robot world...epic.
| MightyBommb chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
| Tayuke chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
i like this. it's the perfect way of relaying a lot of background information without having a character ruin his image by spouting a really long story. your writing style is also absolutely perfect; feels like the official thing.
i'm loving the story so far. it's a very interesting twist and i'm really looking forward to reading more of this. it's very well thought out.
hmm... are those author's intentionally named such? i choked when i saw G. Freeman.