Reviews for Devil's Child
Sugary Snicket chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
TT This is going to sound cliche from a phan, but... poor unhappy little Erik!

Beautifully tragic. You are an incredible author.
thebison chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Toccato No. 9,

As you know I was quite taken with your first story. I am happy to say that I am quite taken with this one as well. The whole thing has a certain flow about it, it's very touching and innocent. Brilliantly done.

The only thing that irks me is the last line, it just isn't what I would put there. I think it would sound better if it wasn't in third person and you put something else in place of 'I.' But it's only a suggestion.

Yours Truly,

Gemz.B chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
that was so painfull! and the ending so strong!

Kaskaderade chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
this was very interesting! good job
IamthePhantomoftheOpera chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
wow...that was really sad...but also really good...
mutantsrocktheworld chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Sad, but pretty well written. I'd give it a 5.7.