|Reviews for Half of Two|
| Alexander D.C chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Hum. This seems to blur the line between prose and poetry; it already seems to have an almost iambic rhythm to it, and would in fact work quite well with just a bit of modification as blank verse. I find myself wanting to read it aloud as a monologue. Although, if we were to do that, there's perhaps just a bit too much rhyme... flee/immortally/free would be just a bit too much assonance for my taste. Anyway, fantastic work. :)
| thebison chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Toccata No. 9,
It was the summary that drew my attention. And now I am so glad that it did. Reading this beautiful piece of prose, I remember what it is like to breath. These words are alive on the paper, these words have life. And you have given it to them.
To make concise what I mean to say in response to your beautiful words, is that it takes a beautiful person to make beautiful things. I love this story, and I hope to read more of your work.
Don't ever loose faith in the things you love and the things you give life to. Best of luck in all your journies.
| APennyForYourThought chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Quite an enjoyable motif here. ;) I loved the imagery, especially of the way the "creature danced upon the tallow".
| Vivacitii chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Oh, my word. Loved this. Your usage of metaphors and personifications really are fantastic!
| IamthePhantomoftheOpera chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
that was kinda depressing...even though i didn't really get all of it...but the general tone got across...and it was depressing...i sound like a demented two year old, don't i. sorry...:) anyways, nice story.