Reviews for A Whisper in the Mind
Death-Angel-of-Anime chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
very clever, hinata's mind is, hm? Very good chapter, update soon.
Osen-san chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
please continue i think its interesting

when does madara come in
Fantasy.Delight-x chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Everyone is so mean to Hinata-Kun!


Sakura kind of deserved that, though. She hurt Hinata-Kun's feelings too much! I would've done that without her even saying anything. :D


Keep up the good work and keep on. . .keeping on?


Stay solid3

-Fantasy Delight;
firegoat chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
your writing seems ok, i havent read anything of yours before so i cant compare (looked at your profile but i cant bring myself to read non-hinata stories sorry )

characters seems a little bit wierd but i'm not sure if thats part of the story so will have to wait and see.

seems interesting though, hinata is cracking .
Hinata lover chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
good start.
Rae2themax chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Hinata is the best! Please continue!
Adelaide 'Adell' Peirce chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
This is interesting. Bit confusing though.
kakashioholic chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
can't wait for the next chapter (:
BlancheDLF chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Well, I personally think this is a very nice start for your history.

The only thing I find a little strange is the characters. I mean, I think some of them are a little OOC (out of character). Sakura isn't that rude normally, for example.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)

P.S.: Sorry about my possible mistakes; I'm spanish, so writting in english is quite difficult for me.
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