|Reviews for Empire|
| Cynical0range chapter 10 . 3/31
sorry. i really wanted to like this and continue following this story. i also really want to know what and why the potters would leave lucius malfoy anything, after all what he did for harry is mostly because it benefits him. but i suppose you have a plan for the mysterious phoenix embossed box. unfortunately i won't find out as i really can't take this fic seriously as so many factors make it too irritating for me to continue i.e.: a dumbledore that is cartoonishly evil and a bit of a joke (if this was your intention then i apologize), remus lupin receiving so much from the potters despite the fact that he didn't do a thing for their only son - he may have got the short end of the stick in life but why should he of all people get free handouts when better people do not?
| Cynical0range chapter 9 . 3/31
why did harry even bother answering dumbledore's summons? he obviously knew what crimes dumbledore committed against him and had even vowed revenge. and yet he naively met dumbledore alone in his office? and had actually thought dumbledore would take him to hear the will? also, why was sirius all chummy with lupin? lupin, while not as bad as dumbles, is just as much of a failure to the potters and sirius. he so easily believed the worst in his supposed best friend and had not even visited him once to ask him why he had betrayed the potters. i imagine if he had in canon sirius would have gotten out much quicker and had his name cleared. he also never made the effort to visit harry and see if he was really happy in his childhood. after all james and sirius did to make him feel accepted during their hogwarts years. i swear to god, james and lily had the worst luck in friends - a cowardly traitor, a self-pitying coward, and a hotheaded fool.
| Cynical0range chapter 7 . 3/31
ugh no. please no harem. it's already rather cliche (no offense). dark, independent harry with a special heritage and aided by everyone, including dark wizards like lucius malfoy and severus snape? he is already a special snowflake. the harem would just be overkill.
| Cynical0range chapter 5 . 3/31
i can see where you are going with harry's special heritage. but if lily is part of the Olympians, how come she was so easily killed?
| Cynical0range chapter 3 . 3/31
was harry actually serious about his inane imaginings for his classes? surely he has opened a textbook before coming to hogwarts? also, i love dumbledore bashing as much a the next person but his characterization is over the top and makes him appear cartoonish. i honestly can't take this fic seriously.
| theUnseenSilence chapter 15 . 11/19/2015
Aug 18, 2013
I am crying. I found this story and it's amazing.
But it hasn't been updated in over two years.
Nov 19, 2015
| natasha.jones.1654 chapter 15 . 9/30/2015
When will you be adding more chapters? I have enjoyed this so far and will you have Harry with someone his age or someone like Lucius Malfoy or Severus Snape?
| Kiraintheheart chapter 15 . 5/20/2015
please please please update!? i am a big fan of this paticular story but you dont upadate! its been sooo long... please do at your earliest convenience
| Mrs. Albus Severus Potter chapter 15 . 4/13/2015
Omg! Please update soon! can't wait to read more chapters!
| jayyfallen chapter 15 . 4/10/2015
UPDATE SOON amazing story love it can't wait 4 more
| Rodgie chapter 15 . 3/20/2015
I hope you decide to update again! Like the story
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/18/2015
can you please update this story soon i really want to know what is going to happen next
| Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 8/6/2014
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| Evesgreenleaf chapter 15 . 6/15/2014
I just finished reading your story. Awesome, loved it. Hope to read an update