Reviews for Empire
Strangersfalling chapter 1 . 7/20
Your story is fancinating I enjoy the overall plot and sarcastic undertones make me laugh. I like the thought of a harem, and would recommend Blaise Zabini as a possible candidate. I hope you keep writing Fighting!
DarkRavie chapter 18 . 6/2
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Death45Scyth47 chapter 18 . 5/30
This is one of the best harry potter fanfics out there and ive read quite a few of them i hope this story lasts for a good while
Calmzone1 chapter 18 . 5/23
Very interesting story. Glad that I happened to come across your story. It could use a bit of tweaking here and there, but overall is a very good read. You isolate the different places well, and your character behaviours follow the plot line. Thanks for sharing.
Calmzone1 chapter 12 . 5/22
Great chapter. I love that Severus keeps stealing Lucius' liquor and he doesn't realize because he has so much. I love that they are all growing up, and hard as it is, going to work together. I like that Lucius lost his mark, and that because he knows his family history, that he figured out who Harry really is. Can't wait to read more.
Calmzone1 chapter 10 . 5/22
Lo, love the every flavour but lemon drops. Great job with the will . I love that it's self updating so that it now takes into account Severus' and Lucius' actions. You can just imagine wheat would have been in it just before term started!
Calmzone1 chapter 9 . 5/22
Just remember that reign is about royalty and ruling, while reins are used on horses and to rein one in ore hold oneself back.
Fallow53 chapter 18 . 4/8
xxx Kudos xxx : )
Guest chapter 18 . 3/21
The next chapter please
pupstarstar chapter 18 . 2/28
Nooo! Don't leave it as a cliffy!
kirsty21 chapter 18 . 2/17
cool update soon thanks
Luc chapter 1 . 2/13
Dumbledore is abit out there. Too obviously insane. I mean why didnt snape ennervate people and have them fetch help from the ministry? Dumbldore couldnt have erased all their memories. Besides aurors surely know occlumency as well as many of the teachers, theyd know their memory was tampered with.
Also I dont get Snape. Clearly he just wants to keep his memories intact, so that in the future, say 20 years feom now, he can come forward once Dumbledore os weakened. Now the deal sucka for Harry. He only gets a charm to take his smell and taste away for a while.
Shadex2 chapter 18 . 1/16
I do oh so hope daphne is part of Harry's harem
MoonAngel103 chapter 18 . 1/13
I am a huge fan of slash, so instead of a regular harem could harry have a slash harem?
fraewyn chapter 18 . 1/11
Love it!
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