|Reviews for The True Way of Getting Strong|
| Sparity101 chapter 2 . 12/16/2014
I couldn't do it, I couldn't read it without hurting my brain.
| Sparity101 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
If it's not to much trouble could you fix up the grammer a bit with this story. I don't say this to be mean, more of wanting to be drawn into the story with raised eyebrow. It needs more of a flow to it, like it from the heart. This story is good in it own way, though you could make a similar story that has some of the same things from this story in the next one with passion and pride.
| BartWLewis chapter 14 . 5/28/2013
This story was incredibly awesome.
| Aliutza chapter 14 . 5/13/2013
Lame dude, ever heard of the oppsosite atraction ?
| Sergeant Daniel chapter 14 . 8/18/2012
This was cute. I love it. Keep up the good work:D
| origin of summoners chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
good fic could be better written but besides that its a good story keep up the good work.
| AzurexJen S chapter 14 . 10/22/2009
It was cool, they didn't talk the way they normally did though; I really think you can improve this story. It has an interesting plot but the characters are a bit OOC.
| AzurexJen S chapter 4 . 10/22/2009
I like the plot, I really do but please fix the grammar... it's confusing to read like that and it gives me headaches. It would be pretty much perfect if you only fixed the grammar.
| Denalien chapter 14 . 10/18/2009
uuh i kind of feel like it was a long story, short version!
Did you even whated to write this?
| thystylocks chapter 14 . 10/18/2009
YES! YES! YES! YES! JINX! JINX! JINX! JINX! My so favorite character! And I thank you for giving them a nickname, "the White Couple". I think it's much more comforting than the mouthful "White Raven and White Beast Boy". I mean, it's six words! I guess now you know how thankful I am...I'll hopefully find your story around soon!
| AkumaKami64 chapter 14 . 10/17/2009
Not bad, something seems off(don't know what exactly). But good idea and good story. Though I wonder, could there be black versions
| Wolvmbm chapter 14 . 10/17/2009
Dang it, I always get choked up when it concerns happy endings. :D
And this one is worth it all the way. :D
Thank you very much for this delightful tale of how love can conquer all. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon all of your stories, because whos knows if this story could lead into a child of White Beast boy and White Raven for a future Titan team to train. :D
Once again, thank you for your great story and please do keep up the good work. ;)
| thystylocks chapter 13 . 10/3/2009
Umm...Can WBB and WR have a short name? White Beastboy and White Raven kind of seems like a mouthful...hehe.
| Wolvmbm chapter 13 . 10/2/2009
What ? Why are you ending this story so soon ? :(
I mean Couldn't you extend the story a bit more, showing Beast boy and Raven's life on Azarth or at least show the team in battle without the assistance of Beast boy and Raven ? :(
I mean couldn't you extend the story just a bit more ? :(
Because I really do enjoy it so much and I hate to see it end so soon. ;(
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great story. ;)
| Omeganian chapter 12 . 10/1/2009
You should stop calling him "White Beast Boy" all the time. Too clumsy sounding, and no other Beast Boy around to need the clarification.
And a beta certainly will do you good (no offense).