Reviews for Battle for the Chocolate
grovyleTheGreat chapter 2 . 10/29/2014
no love is allowed on Legos II
grovyleTheGreat chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
dapperyklutz chapter 2 . 10/25/2010
HAHA! Fascinating! Truly amusing! Laughed a lot. XD And again, garnered weird looks from my family. lol. :))
Rexan chapter 2 . 10/22/2010

should be 'forward' in the situation you used it in; a foreword is 'an introductory statement at the begining of a book'.

Weh-heh. Stupid Jack. x) I was thinking, "Oh noes. That's a suck-ish end to a one shot!" Then I saw there was another chapter, and I was all, "Yay!" xD Good job! b- -thumbs up-
xyuffiex chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
XD Loved the whole two-shot.

Specially the whole fight for the chocolate and Mari and Jack's kiss.

And of course the reason why the Doctor and Rose got chased in the first place ;)
Lizzle09 chapter 2 . 8/27/2009

Im soo glad you changed this into a story instead of just a oneshot :)

I loved Jack's pure flirtatiousness with Mari and how he got chased away by her father because the Doctor 'forgot' to mention the law aha ;)

And the fact that he risked it to go out and get the chocolate lmao ]

I thought the ending was great and how Rose and the Doctor had been guilty of the same previously ...

I really enjoyed it,

Well done

happyfew chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Hee! That was fun! Really great story.
KittyKatZorse chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Haha that was very funny and very well written!
happyfew chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Hee, that was fun! Like it lots.
Lizzle09 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Great start to the story, cant wait to read more if there is gonna be more lol (:

All over a chocolate aha, how original ] And Jack just waltz's in and eats it after they've been fighting over it aha.

Loved it!

Update soon x