|Reviews for Just You and Me|
| Stads02 chapter 21 . 1/23
i was happily reading this story, dreading for... 'that moment' to come along... then it did... the terrible 'last chapter published' moment. there was no "next" button to press. no chapter 22.
so please update it! and soon! and i really hope that Ginny and Harry FINALLY become friends. not even anything else. just friends. because whatever's happening to her with Riddle is killing me.
| pleurocoelus chapter 18 . 11/12/2013
This is a fascinating story so far. I see that you've responded to an anonymous reviewer who said that Ginny was being a Mary Sue. I really don't know where that reviewer pulled that assessment out of. Not knowing this person I can't say for sure, but that expression parenthesis that Ginny is a Mary Sue) is very common among Ginnybashers. They complain that the Canon Ginny is that and then they love to troll other people's stories and make that same complaint on the reviews without any real evidence. Again, I don't know this person and so I can't say for sure. It's just an observation.
Re Tom Riddle as a pedo. I've never seen this before, but it works here. I usually consider him to be asexual - lusting only for power. I have seen Lockhart written that way, though.
| nayin17 chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
Harry is soooooo sweet
| ladymirth chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
This story would be so much better if you wrote Ron less gormless and didn't keep putting him down to make Ginny look better. Also in the books Hermione hadn't a clue what "Mudblood" meant and didn't give a damn when she did because the non-Steve Klovesified Hermione is awesome like that.
| FreelanceBum chapter 14 . 3/26/2013
Blackie from the Girl who gave the name Pigwidgeon to a tiny owl?
| FreelanceBum chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
Fan of Ron? They exist?
| FreelanceBum chapter 7 . 3/25/2013
Ooh, poor Ginny
| random11121992 chapter 21 . 12/25/2012
Please carry this on, it's a good story!
| cr17o chapter 21 . 11/13/2012
Really nice story I hope you are still planning to update it (though that seems unlikely given how long it has been).
The relationship between Harry and Ginny actually reminds me a bit of Need by iluvfanfics1 which i read a long time ago. And line that story I have enjoyed your one a lot.
anyway keep up the good work
| mrs.coltondixon chapter 21 . 11/1/2012
I like it, but you have a LOT of the original story in there, and it's kinda gettig boring. I think you should try condensing. I know you had like 12 pages all on CHamber of Secrets, and it owuld be weird to make the next ones shorter, but if you want to keep readers interested, put more of your own works, and less of the original in your story.
| Publicola chapter 17 . 9/29/2012
You know, every time I read a fan-fic and see something like this (Fudge 'accidentally' letting Pettigrew escape), I remember the original series and realize that no, people in the HP universe are exactly that corrupt, and I really shouldn't be surprised. Still grates on me every time.
Rowling created quite possibly one of the worst societies ever put on page. It isn't just the obvious unethical behavior of the government. It's the fact that her magic system has essentially no limits (Mind control? Memory wipes? Invisibility? Teleportation?), no built-in costs, and no accountability, on top of the obvious issues with corrupt leaders of state, manipulative headmasters, and child soldiers.
| Publicola chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
Clever use of the Sorting Hat for subduing the basilisk. As for Snape (master legilimens) leaving them alone to the tender mercies of Professor Lockhart... yeah, I still say he was trying to kill them all along. A more realistic end of the chapter would be Snape returning with a look of disappointment, and a bitter "Can't even die right" or something like that.
But then, I am SO not a Snape fan.
| Ultimate Challenge writer chapter 21 . 9/12/2012
Please hurry up with the next chapter this is a good chapter
| Chris chapter 20 . 8/26/2012
I really do like your fic but im not going to read it anymore. It was a good storry but the fact that young tom riddle reminded me of other fanfics which i also left. Im sorry but i felt like i should write this out.
| JC70s chapter 21 . 8/16/2012
I though this was a Harry/Ginny story. Having adventures together, falling in love and fighting 'till defeating Voldemort. Nosw I see is a Harry, and Ginny story and, to matters worse, there is too much go around, and around. Is Ginny a Horcrux? Is Ginny a Salazar Slytherin descendant and therefore Voldemort's? Hope you continue and finish the story.