Reviews for The Death
AiDeeKay chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Wow. I love it.

I really like how you made Kerry strong. Not many people do that. So, that was automatic kudos. You also made her personality so realistic, and her reaction to seeing Michel again also realistic.

Just, wow.
Angelkrow666 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
This is very a bit of a hotpot of information not very precise and clear but like you said you could spend alot of word count explaining everything and of few things are questionable like would michel every really forget kerry and if he did would he react so quilty about the bac to the original book when regina got killed he was always touchy and aggravated about the whole situation.i do think you got kerry very clear i could totally imagine her this exact way but like i said this could be your new baby for a story or a very interesting oneshot.
Ninjallerina chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Wonderfully bittersweet! Please hurry up and finish writing your novel so you can expand this...or post another amazing project!

~Ninjallerina
Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
So much win.
Restless Dreaming Spirit chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
You're rite, this could be epic if you wanted it to be.

I like how youre writing the vampire characterstics.

I hope to see more.

But if you decide not...well, it still makes on hell of a one-shot.
MythStar Black Dragon chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Whoa liked was very good i mean amazing.

maria