|Reviews for I Lied|
| starofcote chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
"I said lips, moron."
I say hilarious, genius :)
| CuCernunnos chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Cute, a little fragmented. I would mention the bolding of every word but you don't do that now, so mute point.
| Sonya Rivers chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
I can just imagine that battle that follows...
| draco122 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
very nice would have never seen that coming the Raven part Star fire is very clear
| Elle Wednesday chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Aw, this is sweet. I like it a lot. The characterizations are really good and in-character, and the dialouge flowed really naturally. My only criticisim is that there were a few small editing mistakes here and there (for example, "beat red" should be "beet red", and I think that by "Kick you butt in the gym" you meant "kick your butt"? That confused me a little.), and the whole story was in bold, which was a bit distracting. Great job on this.