Reviews for Cards
PADavis chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Oh - very cool. Seeing his boys as non-solid shades is brilliant.

Twinchy chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
"the circumstance of his demise was under his control" most definitely! There's no arguing that.

Well done introspective about John.
Supernoodle chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Oh I do miss John being in the mix. Bring back John, Kripke.

I particulary liked this part:

Sam’s a spirit and Dean’s a shade and they no longer speak his language.

Love the weird point of view - from the dead person talking about the living.

Well done!
LivingForTv chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Never saw a fic with this POV. Good!
Nana56 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
I think so, too. I can see John standing on his side and not seeing his boys clearly like he used to.

Good one.
Merisha chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Aw, that was awesome, I love the take you have on ghosts feeling they are solid. Heartbreaking that he's reaching for his boys but they're like mist between his fingers. Really lovely drabble!

Hugs and luv

Mish :D
Tribble Master chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
i love this. john is so determined! way to go for the win! WRITE ON!
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Oh, that's a great one! I love it.
Swellison chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Interesting turned-around viewpoint, John looking out from Hell. I think you've got a typo in the last sentence, plays instead of lays?

sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
That was interesting, to see the thoughts that could have possibly running through John's hands as he waited to make his way out of hell and sensing his boys just beyond the gate!