Reviews for The Raikage
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
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Nyte chapter 1 . 7/11
So this is the dude from wattpads new acount
ZeroQi chapter 3 . 6/23
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Are we reading a grocery list or a story?
Guest chapter 19 . 6/8
This was great but When is the next update
dinorun154 chapter 1 . 6/5
U SON OF A BITCH UPDATE THIS STORY NOW IT'S SO GOOD
Guest chapter 4 . 5/31
fuck this is so time consuming and boring
SSB Gogeta chapter 19 . 5/29
Dude In chapter 12 Naruto just did Trunk move just like Trunk did to Freiza, does that mean Naruto will meet the z fighters.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/19
when are going to update this story
Evil Hero Malicious Edge chapter 19 . 5/8
PLEASE UPDATE!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/6
You need a beta
You wrote Hinata "whore" gloves instead of wore
Guest chapter 3 . 5/6
My main issue with this chapter aside from the massive info dump and overpowered kumo is I really doubt Tsunade would teach anyone besides shizune before meeting Naruto
IU chapter 19 . 5/4
I Can't help but cringe over the fact that I loved this Story, that is essentially Crossover info dump.

Growing up really opens your eyes.
thegrison chapter 19 . 4/21
Not bad but WAY TOO MUCH pointless details. Seriously you can thumb it down a lot.
Wanna.smash chapter 3 . 4/1
Way to many fucking ocs. You expect me to remember all these nobodies
dbrame91 chapter 4 . 3/21
Not a bad premise. Suffers a few cringe inducing issues. Frequently misses words/adds more than needed. Random capitalizations of words like water. Over use of proper nouns such as "Tsuki no Kuni and Umi no Kuni" when just saying "both countries" would do. A good number of wrong words in places like dose being used instead of does, or oblivious instead of obvious.
Honestly a good scrub down and clean edit can take care of a lot of these issues. I also know it is possible that english is not the writer's first language, and I am not trying to pick on him/her.
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