Reviews for The Raikage
Guest chapter 6 . 3/7
Samurai warriors...I see you
Guest chapter 3 . 3/7
Ah Dynasty warrior character names. Greetings. I see you.
blackicecolombiano chapter 2 . 3/6
who is tsuande? or shikamura?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
Do you even comprehend the series? Are you actually writing this idiotic trash and think it's good?
Lewis-Sama chapter 19 . 3/3
Amazing story. I have had it marked for reading for two years and I finally got it done! Yes! And totally worth the wait.

Loving the story and I hope you update soon.
Terms Of Service Agreement chapter 1 . 3/3
alright, chapter one and I'm already annoyed, this story doesn't not need to be this damn long, I'm all for detailed story writing, but I can't stand the amount of bad grammar, it's a good concept for a story, but this doesn't need to be longer than Tolkien novel
aarif chapter 1 . 2/20
Not worth reading. So much useless shit is happening that one gets easily confused. You really like dragging things but you don't realize it causes reader to lose interest. And you have added TONS of characters again a useless thing.
alexhively815 chapter 1 . 2/17
This story needs fixing up, maybe have someome edit your story and fix it up for you so it isn't so choppy.
Agfox chapter 1 . 2/13
This story is choppy, you write like a child, and you added way too much content for it to be even remotely attractive.
Your grammar is another folly that'll get you nowhere.
My last complaint is all those references. It's fine to use a few, but you just took a whole bunch and game them each similar backstories.
Perseus D. Uzumaki chapter 19 . 2/8
The story is really good. Hope you update this story as well as your other stories. Read this Fanfic multiple times even if the information was quite long but overall this story is awesome.
Guest chapter 15 . 2/3
hmm maybe you should work on your fight scenes, and mostly on the way they are written, the way its used now its almost like show and tell, you just go round the circle and have every part of the battle describe like thirty seconds of fighting and some snarky comment and then you move on to the next person, ater which it starts all over again, honestly its very tiring to try to get through even though the combat itself is not badly written at all, but because you insist on describing every single move made by every single person it just doesnt flow at ALL
Thwelastlotus chapter 2 . 2/2
Wait wtf did Naruto actually die
Guest chapter 3 . 2/1
jesus christ the infodump is real, this was REALLY hard to get through, spread the information dumps out over multiple chapters PLEASE
Guest chapter 2 . 2/1
oh and seriously we dont need EVERYONE's backstory and changes right now you know, you could have just done it piecemeal and revealed a bit at a time, this would make this less of an information dump and more interesting
Guest chapter 2 . 2/1
dammit man use paragraphs! walls of text are one of the main ways you can turn people off, in addition to spelling errors, i like the concept but the intro is a biiiiit long, but that may just seem to be the case because of the huuuuge paragraphs
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