So I like the story a lot so far based on where it’s going the only thing is when you introduce 17 or so characters in a row with a paragraph of back story it becomes tideous and mind numbing after awhile , I can’t even really remember half of them and I just read the chapter.

I seriously hope you update this cuz I really want to know what happens to hinata

Tsuande and Tsunade should meet. I bet they'd have a lot in common.

You DID realized, back when you wrote this, that “Sairento Kiringu” is just Japlish for “silent killing”, yes? So you can just say “silent killing”. No need to torture yourself writing out the “English words with a Japanese accent” technique names..

I tried to read this but it felt like I was getting pimp slapped by a wall of text. The first two chapters are like 40000 words of only context.

Your story is just like the Lord of the Rings Triology,there is a backstory for everything ,but in the end it only enhances the storytelling

Tu historia es increible por favor actualiza por favor pues es una joya en toda regla

Those anbu are giving away way too much info to lee and friends.

This story could have been really good if there was not so much bulk of side character development who are not important.

Ngentot. I'm speechless looking at the spelling and grammar. Not to say the wall of text. Suffice to say that I was less than pleased.

not a fan of the Harem either. I get that it's technically part of the Clan Restoration Act, but I can't see Naruto doing that

not bad but your chapters are NEEDLESSLY LONG!

you have an overabundance of info, to many runoff sentences to count, and the chapters are NEEDLESSLY LONG which is actually extremely annoying

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TOOOOOOOOO MANY OC CHARACTERS AND A LOT OF NEEDLESS INFORMATION.
the story is good ish but seriously you went completely overboard with the amount of OCs

Please continue this story

why are kumo ninjas telling them so much information that could get them killed. auugghhhhh