Reviews for To Kill A Heart
snowywhite chapter 21 . 9/7/2009
I would've puke all over if I were Yozak... It was just so nasty and disgusting. Good thing that they were soldiers and have experience in wars. I could never understand Eternity. Well, she does love Dagaz but she doesn't even wanna explain it *leave the explanation for later, it's better*

~()~ Yuuram! LOL! Fluffy-ness.. Is that what you call it? XD 2nd kiss apart from the one from Shinou's prank. Come to think of it, when Wolfram/Shinou trying to kiss Yuuri in the machine, Yuuri could've looked away and prevent the kiss. -sigh- -come back to life again- XDD He does love Wolfram! LOL!

Sorry for the long review. I'm just too happy~~ Anyway, thanks a lot for the chapter. When r u gonna put up the next chapter? XD I really can't wait for it.

Princess Sin chapter 21 . 9/6/2009
what in the world happened? why isn't eternity answering wolfram or helping him? i mean it's obvious she doesn't want wolfram to kill dagaz because she loves him. so why won't she do something. at first i was thinking maybe that wasn't really eternity that he saw but if it wasn't she would have come to him to warn him. or maybe dagaz powers have become so powerful until she is useless to aid wolfram any longer.

oh but what you are putting poor conrad and yosak through is so gross. digging through piles of rotting dead bodies. it is sick to the core and then the only thing they are wearing is their underwear, which isn't much covering to begin with. that dagaz is one sick S.O.B.

i am so waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter. hopefully, wolfram will be able to save them.
NEINIMN chapter 21 . 9/6/2009
Aw...! That was so sweet! XD
Miyuki Meiru chapter 21 . 9/6/2009
Nice and sweet chapter!
kuzon234ray chapter 21 . 9/6/2009
Ah! Just... ah!

Good chapter!

KythAnDra chapter 21 . 9/6/2009
That was fast!

And like I predicted, this chappy has awesomeness written all over it.

Could it be that Eternity was the one who fall in love with Dagaz? I mean...the way she said "No" in despair. I don't know...I'm just speculating here. Maybe I'm wrong.

The last scene was disturbing. Death all around, hopeleness and there was nothing Wolfie could do...not just yet I suspected!

Great one...Looking forward for your next update.

(Hope you're not tired from reading my long review for the 2nd time in one day).
Rika chapter 20 . 9/6/2009
:) YAY! This was totally awesome
pikeebo chapter 20 . 9/6/2009
oh oh! how is this possible? they went all the way and found to box ..instead .. conrad and yozak almost got "eaten up" ... then the two got lured away by "the Sage" ... This really leaves wolfram and yuuri very vulnarable! not to mention, the two may even die!

this fic is just getting better all the time!
KythAnDra chapter 20 . 9/6/2009
Am I sensing a ConZak here? I just love the last few sentences. So sweet.

Aww...I love the YuuRam scene. Finally, Yuuri have learnt to accept Wolfram as he is.

Ohh...that disgusting, horrible excuse of man. He has the most twisted sense of decor. I mean, come on, who 'decorates' his floor with skin strip, right?

Awesome chappy. Can't wait for an update. I know the next one will be much more exciting. Sorry for the long review. I am just delirious with happiness.

Thank you.

P/S: BTW, I am having difficulties with uploading my files as well. Care to tell me how you do it? And how long does it take?
snowywhite chapter 20 . 9/6/2009
XD finally an update. I'm reviewing this on a handphone. Told u i'll a way 2 read ur story. Hehe!

Oh no! Conrad n Yozak is in trouble. I hope they'll be fine. What happen to Murata? :D I like the yuuram moment! Lol. More actions in the next chapter... I can't wait 4 it. Gonna check it 2morrow tho'... But I'll review it... Thanks a lot 4 d new chapter.

kuzon234ray chapter 20 . 9/6/2009
I knew that wasn't Murata, I just knew it! Oh, I hope Conrad and Yozak make it...

Good chapter!

Daydreamer-Of-The-Unknown chapter 20 . 9/6/2009
Thankies for another amazing

chapter and thankies for

dedicating the chapter to me!

This was just ace! Cute

Yurram moments! && loved how

Dagaz changes how he looks to

Wolfram, their mum and the


Cute last few lines as well XD

Looking forward to the next!

x Casondrah Kiku x
Iellece chapter 19 . 9/3/2009
i'm already getting excited..

plese make more

update soon

i really love your story...

it has an exciting effect

i love it...


yuuram forever...

KythAnDra chapter 19 . 9/2/2009
I wonder what they will find down there.

If the situation wasn't grim, I bet it would be funny to see Wolfram piggybacking Conrad.

I could only shiver when I read about the miniscule monsters's attack. That was just..horrifying...

Cannot wait for the next update.

NEINIMN chapter 19 . 9/2/2009
Wow... this is probably the first fanfiction I've ever read where Wolfram runs away during the middle of the night and he gets caught by YUURI, of all people, and even brought back.

You're such a miracle updater! I adore you...

I want more more more more...
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