Reviews for To Kill A Heart
HelloRoxy chapter 2 . 8/17/2009
Please continue, you've caught my attention :)
THiaLieN chapter 2 . 8/17/2009
This is a great plot.. Please continue!

I understand Cardiac is heart. but.. "Cardidenturiatus".. how did you come up with that name? nice.. :D

kuzon234ray chapter 2 . 8/16/2009
Ah, great chapter!

Kyth chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
That was powerfully written. I could almost feel Wolfram's anguish when he failed to save the woman and her baby. That scene was so heart-wrenching. Cannot wait for the update. Please do it soon. Tanoshimini shite imasu...
kuzon234ray chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Man, you got me hooked on the first chapter!

Nice start!

Princess Sin chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
what a sad chapter but it was done so well. now i have to see what will wolfram do now.
Rika chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
This was pure awesomeness.

Update soon please!
Knight of Caeli chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
You wrote "Yuuri's younger brother" in parenthesis after Shori's name. You should change that because Shori is Yuuri's older brother, not younger.
iolah chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Wonderful start. It is very well written and interesting. I can't wait to see how it progresses. The part with the woman and the baby was gruesome, but beautifully so. It must have been a difficult thing to write so well, kudos.
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