Its really sweet and romantic, I almost cried! Its SO GOOD

I was wondering why, after what Renee did to Bella by stealing her away & putting her in a boarding school, would she name her baby after her? I liked the story, & I was glad to see Renee punished (I assume she went to prison, since it was a Federal crime), but I never thought (after losing her for 9 years) that Charlie would disown her! I thought that everyone was human in this story, but when Renessme started talking so soon, I was wondering, were they human? Did they turn into vampires? I guess I got lost somewhere in there. I really like the ending, too.

I think this one was a really sweet story loll its so innocent...

This was a great story i hope you write more.

p.s. Please write more.

two words... Luved It! :)

you should write another story of when they are both kids but make their childhood last longer. you could name it kiddy love

That would be an awesome fan fiction . I've always wondered what the story would be like if Edward was human and Bella Was a Vampire.

I don't understand.. this is FIRST GRADE.

what FIRST GRADERS mom would say that they"love eachother" and hes "so much happier"

this is way too unrealistic for it to be even somewhat possible, I could get it if it was 8th or 9th grade

but seriously? First grade?

Great...Jacob's back. *sobs into desk* No!

I'd melt too...*wipes drool off side of mouth*

Gr...evil Renee. Lovin it so far!

Aww...that's really sweet. An eight year old Edward would be adorable.

Yum...chocolately goodness.

aww so sweet :)

I love it i really do but i wish this last chapter could have also had Alice,Jasper,Emmtt, and Rosalie but i love this story.