Reviews for Night Moves part II When it's least expected
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
To throw it out there, you could try switching night movies one and two around. So it's more like a series of stories
Treskttn chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Dude u r flippin amazing! Hahhahahhahaha this story was delicious i love it
outerdarkness chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Okay...I've read number one of this series, and now this one too, and I must say...do you even have somebody check this? There are spelling errors abound in both, and you have this weird habit of putting a space in front of the punctuation marks, and not using the right quote marks. Double (i.e. " )are used for out-loud dialogue, while single (i.e. ' ) are used for quotes inside of dialogue or thought dialogue. Really irking.
Chico Magnifico chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Wow! Awesome Story! BB/Rae 4eva!
Jessicupcake chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Night Moves waas a good story so this was nice addition since I wanted to know how they ended up on the couch...