|Reviews for A Very Mannequin Christmas: Journey To The Heart|
| Baby-Cellophane chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
You don't need to put a synopsis of the film in the story. The only people who will read this story are fans of the film and people who have seen it.
You also don't need to put a summary of your story in. People won't need to read the story because you've put a summary in.
I'm not trying to be harsh here. I'm just trying to be helpful. I've seen "Mannequin," and I really didn't like it. You just mentioned this story in your note, so I skimmed the opening.