|Reviews for The Debut|
| Stars.Are.Metaphors chapter 7 . 9/20
He's trying to come up with platonic reasons for his jealousy. Boy is in denial.
| Stars.Are.Metaphors chapter 6 . 9/20
I've never actually thought about Sasuke/Ino, but I completely get what you mean with needing a girl and Ino just being there. I don't mind the pairing. It's rather interesting to see.
| Stars.Are.Metaphors chapter 5 . 9/20
And the plot thickens. To sleep or not to sleep, that is the question I'm dealing with on a school day at 1 a.m..
| ThatBrunnette chapter 20 . 4/17
I enjoyed this story :)
| anne chapter 20 . 3/30
gosh that was a wonderful fic! thank you for writing this! i truly enjoyed this fic
| Yvonne Park chapter 20 . 3/29
Great story! I really enjoyed it. I have definitely found that I am a huge fan of Gaara/Hinata. They are so cute together! You did a really good job with this story! :)
| Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...
| 4thkage chapter 20 . 1/14
dissappointed but i must admit...i love the story...
i feel disappointed bcoz...i want more of GaaHina...
sweetest couple eva!
| 4thkage chapter 14 . 1/14
aaaa...with those line at the end...
i know who's the culprit...
| 4thkage chapter 6 . 1/13
i love gaara...that's all i can say...
| 4thkage chapter 2 . 1/13
the first story ever...
i read with full concentration in serious mode this fanfic
| Nekocin chapter 20 . 11/23/2014
This is an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing this.
| ninjaluver chapter 20 . 11/15/2014
I have fallen in love with this story. I can not believe I have just found this story and I've been on fan fiction since 2009 xD this was truly a beautiful story!
| Scarlette Winter chapter 8 . 8/22/2014
Insult to her and her family? That screams bastard child. Is she perhaps Misa or the civilian woman (who by now wouldn't be of age to participate, though)? That, or she's Hikari.
| Crinsomtear chapter 20 . 4/6/2014
It was beautiful... the story I mean ;D
I loved how intricate you were and how smoothly you wrapped everything up in the end. In truth, I would have loved to know more about Temari and Shika, but I'm also glad you didn't because it would've annoyed me when I wanted to know mre about Hinata and Gaara :). But hopefully you've written more about Temari and Shika in other books?
Can't wait to find out if you did. So, in conclusion I want to say: thank you for making my day with this book :D. I truly enjoyed reading it