Reviews for The Debut
ThatBrunnette chapter 20 . 4/17
I enjoyed this story :)
anne chapter 20 . 3/30
gosh that was a wonderful fic! thank you for writing this! i truly enjoyed this fic
Yvonne Park chapter 20 . 3/29
Great story! I really enjoyed it. I have definitely found that I am a huge fan of Gaara/Hinata. They are so cute together! You did a really good job with this story! :)

Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...

4thkage chapter 20 . 1/14
already finish...
dissappointed but i must admit...i love the story...
i feel disappointed bcoz...i want more of GaaHina...
sweetest couple eva!
4thkage chapter 14 . 1/14
aaaa...with those line at the end...
i know who's the culprit...
4thkage chapter 6 . 1/13
i love gaara...that's all i can say...
4thkage chapter 2 . 1/13
the first story ever...
i read with full concentration in serious mode this fanfic
Nekocin chapter 20 . 11/23/2014
This is an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing this.
ninjaluver chapter 20 . 11/15/2014
I have fallen in love with this story. I can not believe I have just found this story and I've been on fan fiction since 2009 xD this was truly a beautiful story!
Scarlette Winter chapter 8 . 8/22/2014
Insult to her and her family? That screams bastard child. Is she perhaps Misa or the civilian woman (who by now wouldn't be of age to participate, though)? That, or she's Hikari.
Crinsomtear chapter 20 . 4/6/2014
It was beautiful... the story I mean ;D
I loved how intricate you were and how smoothly you wrapped everything up in the end. In truth, I would have loved to know more about Temari and Shika, but I'm also glad you didn't because it would've annoyed me when I wanted to know mre about Hinata and Gaara :). But hopefully you've written more about Temari and Shika in other books?
Can't wait to find out if you did. So, in conclusion I want to say: thank you for making my day with this book :D. I truly enjoyed reading it
Sighcoe chapter 20 . 4/4/2014
At last, finished! I'm so satisfied! I love it. I absolutely adore it! Happy ending always makes me happy. Thank you for writing this and the hard work you put just by updating, and spending your precious time completing it. You made GaaHina fans melt in a happy loving puddle. *huggles*
Sighcoe chapter 11 . 4/4/2014
*huge smile* those two... those two! they're so lying to themselves. They're so in love with each other and yet they don't know how to eloquently say it. They're just so so cute... :D

Seeing as this is an alternative universe, now I quite understand as to why Gaara's demon was still inside him. Again, seriously, those mercenaries were funny. Gaara could take them all without breaking a sweat, and the fact that his demon was still inside him really made them so pathetic... Whoever sends those killers were stupid... really really stupid. Not only they're trying to assassinate a kage, a jinchuuriki one at that. Akazuki, those ranked S assassins needs to team up to get one jinchuuriki, and those stupid mercenarie tried it? So pathetic. I wanted to laugh at them so so so much. I bet Hinata could put them all down alone.
Sighcoe chapter 10 . 4/4/2014
I enjoyed Gaara and Hinata's interaction, although I'm not sure as to why they're using the carriage. Wouldn't it be faster if they do it the traditional ninja way. I read/watched that even during special kage's gathering, the kage's uses their feet to travel. And Hinata is almost a jounin. :)

I wonder who those retarded people were trying to kill/capture them. Seriously, in the middle of the dessert, where the sand was everywhere... stupid.
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