Reviews for The Smart One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Merlin I love Scorpius. The cheeky and charming one! And the James cameo is great fun too! Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! That was wonderful. I love your portrayal of Scorpius. Endearing, arrogant, and cocky. S'how I like my Malfoy men :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute. But confidant is someone you tell things, most likely secrets to, confident, I think, was the one you were looking for. A few minor errors that were overshadowed by the scuccess of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes... you look absolutely heart broken! loved it, love your stories :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story. and then forgot the title, so i spent a while searching for it so i could read it again. and it's just so good. i like the build up and how Scorpius has been planning since fourth year. wonderful writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing XD I loved it! And i LOL with the "happy dance" of James |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very humorous... |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor james "his feet his feet his feet are on fire" *sound lik the roof is on fire* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very funny xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do need to start reading more Harry Potter stories. Especially if all of them are as awesome as this one ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, that was tremendously cute. Like massively. I'm smiling a super huge grin right now. Cause Scorpius' plan was hilarious and really cute, and their conversations had so much chemistry and and and... I just loved it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've got about three words for this: light, sweet and funny. I mean, sure, there's no epic discoveries, soul searching journeys or meaningful conversations that drag on and on but that's not the point of it, is it? If it was meant to be heartwarming and relaxing then it was just that. And I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha. i like it alot! you did a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is so cute! :) Really great. 10/10 ~Colleen |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha this is so funny! Especially the last line, and all of Scorpius's and Rose's conversations. |