|Reviews for Fall of a Hero|
| KuroroLucilfer chapter 1 . 4/2
ohhhhhhhh i extremely love this story. I cannot stop reading it and in fact yesterday I read it until midnight! Excellent storyline and incredible imagination! love the sadistic Ivan and a little masochistic Alfred. When thing comes to capture and recapture America, the story is really exciting!
BTY, can I translate this excellent work into Chinese and share with more friends? Many of my friends ship RussiaAmerica but they have difficulties reading in English. Pleaseeeee!
| MapleBirdie chapter 52 . 3/21
Goodness... This was beautiful, yet the ending was so sad I cried... I love it!
| RikaM00n chapter 52 . 3/8
It was just awesome. I have nothing more to say. It's great. It's too good to be just a fanfiction. .
| Guest chapter 52 . 3/2
This is without a doubt, the best fanfiction I have ever read. You have made my week. 100/100.
| Crimson cat angel chapter 52 . 11/25/2015
| BlackKat99Rocks chapter 52 . 11/10/2015
I-i really loved this story, but I burst out in tears when Ivan did that thing to Alfred and himself. I got so attached to the two. ;-;
| Kittycay chapter 52 . 9/11/2015
You killed my heart, :'(. Loved the story though.
| Am799 chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
I wanted to let you know I used this for my AP History final. We had to make a world where something else happened that made a drastic change.
I read your story a week before I was assigned the final, and my group mates (who are also gladly Hetalians) agreed to use this prompt. We received a 100 for our final. Thank you for the idea and a good read.
| AtlantischerRim chapter 52 . 7/4/2015
I'm sooo happy to read this story x) Poor America and terrible Russia x)
And I want to translate this story to Chinese and republish it in Chinese web. All your rights will be saved. Can I have your permission?
Looking forword to your review. Thx. x)))
| Amu4ever chapter 44 . 6/30/2015
Sooo...that was disturbing...
That's not an insult...it just is. It's Ivan's fault really or whatever made him be like he is now...
The stockholm syndrome is a really strange thing, huh? I mena it kinda makes sense for such a syndrome to happen, but to love ones torturer is still ...not something you want to do...
| Guest chapter 40 . 6/30/2015
Still wondering what happens, if the representative of a country dies. Oh and what's with their bosses?I mean the representatives don't rule the country...they just represent it...
I think they are kind of like advisors...
Oh and I am Amu. Just forgot to log in :)
| Guest chapter 39 . 6/30/2015
Very bad decision on Alfred's side. Making Russia think he hates him is obviously not helping
| Guest chapter 35 . 6/30/2015
If Alfred said he prefered it when Russia bit him and hurt him a little, then that might not have happened.
| Amu4ever chapter 34 . 6/30/2015
Russians view of a 'perfect situation" is really twisted...kinda like him. He is really quite broken, huh?
I wonder, if he was born with a psychical illness or wheter it developed over time...
| Amu4ever chapter 31 . 6/30/2015
I do understand how his reaction came about. I expected it acutally. It's kinda natural for people like him to be scared of feelings...
Not that I am an expert or anything, but...it seems logical.