Reviews for Moonbeams
Adriannu255 chapter 5 . 10/29/2009
Another great chapter! Keep up the good work!
BigBossofMoss chapter 5 . 10/29/2009
Hmm...(serious/understanding nod)

Your getting better...but try to add more length to your chapters
BigBossofMoss chapter 4 . 10/29/2009
Hmm...(serious nod)

The plot starts... Remember to give more details in your wwritings
BigBossofMoss chapter 3 . 10/29/2009
Details finally. (nods head) hmm...
BigBossofMoss chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Hmm...(nods head)
BigBossofMoss chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Adriannu255 chapter 4 . 10/27/2009
O... Can't wait to see Lloydie's reaction to that! Keep up the good work!
Adriannu255 chapter 3 . 10/12/2009
Yay for Colloyd! Although the Sheena torture is not something I'm fond of, it's funny in a strange kind of way. Please write more!
MasterIckolas Xaron chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Its a good story.

One problem though. You need to slow down a little. Give a bit more detail too. And stop with the cheesy lines Lloyd and Collette were saying. You know as well as I that they would never talk that cheesy.
Mattricole chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
Good story, good to read when I'm eating cheese...
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