|Reviews for coming home|
| Jikufurido chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
My, I have to congratulate you. This fic is one of the most realistic (on canon words) I have read or remember I have read. It is more like a epilogue, a sequence that can be put just after the serie. An objetive one.
The expression you used are well placed and the storytelling is clean and well paced.
Don't miss the sequel of Fafner (it is official anyway).