|Reviews for Save me|
| wraithperfection chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
I am fond of your story, I don't think it's lame at all; the idea of Todd recognizing and helping Jeannie was nice; it would be interesting to see how would Todd manage among humans on Earth...I'd hope Jeannie would eventually help Todd (perhaps contact and persuade Rodney and John Sheppard) to make his way back to Pegasus...
| Technician Fan chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
| SGA-Seven chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Good story - you could do a sequel to this - Todds life on the run and how Jeanie ends up helping him. Haven't read any that combine Jeanie and Todd.
| Isolde Jansma chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Not lame, but there are a couple of things that need picking apart:
Todd's speech/dialogue is overdone, and far too complex so I think you need to watch a few of his episodes - he is also incredibly Machiavellian and you could have so used that in this little story.
Some punctuation and spelling issues, but not too many.
What the hell is a Wraith, even Todd, doing wandering around a city on Earth without an armed escort?
Apart from that - nice one and the answer to your question is 'yes' Caleb and Jeannie are married.