|Reviews for Save me|
| Technician Fan chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
| SGA-Seven chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Good story - you could do a sequel to this - Todds life on the run and how Jeanie ends up helping him. Haven't read any that combine Jeanie and Todd.
| Isolde Jansma chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Not lame, but there are a couple of things that need picking apart:
Todd's speech/dialogue is overdone, and far too complex so I think you need to watch a few of his episodes - he is also incredibly Machiavellian and you could have so used that in this little story.
Some punctuation and spelling issues, but not too many.
What the hell is a Wraith, even Todd, doing wandering around a city on Earth without an armed escort?
Apart from that - nice one and the answer to your question is 'yes' Caleb and Jeannie are married.