|Reviews for Two Worlds One Family|
| pachysam chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Looking forward to when Tarzan meets Jane.
| EYDF-Thomas chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Coraline Muvleez I like your ideas if I continue this story would you mid helping edit it?
| Coraline Muvleez chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Interesting. Michael Joseph...? That's different.
"a really loud howl" ...Perhaps a different set of words would be more appropriate.
I'll assume Tarzan is sad.
"...he went over to him" and sat staring for a moment. His eyes held a lost, faraway look, Mark noted. Then he threw his head back and howled; it was an anguished, mournful cry that echoed off the mountains and hung in the air long, long after he had ceased. It rang in Mark's ears; he had never heard anything so sad before. New calls suddenly rose from all around them as if to answer.
| cutelittlewitch215 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
this story sounds really great I read the first chapter I hope you will continue to write