|Reviews for Ivory and Gold|
| Laurie143 chapter 28 . 1/13
I LOVED IT! Please update soon can't wait for more chapters!:)
| Phantom- of- light chapter 28 . 9/6/2013
why is this complete when its not finished? x
| Bell 1 chapter 28 . 2/25/2013
Well, that was a pretty cruddy ending. Since it ended here, it doesn't seem much like a Carlisle/Bella fic anymore. :( *cries*
The story was pretty interesting. I wanted to kill Jacob myself, that much is for sure. I don't fully get why they wouldn't want to pursue the intimacy they shared in Edward's room, but had no qualms about it in the bed he shared with Esme while she was downstairs. :(
Well, I guess, at least the family is still together, but will they ever really heal? Will they ever get over this infraction? Will Esme? What about Emmett & Rosalie? Rosalie can hold a grudge for eternity, or so it seems with her behavior in the Twilight series.
Other than that, I sent you some PMs that you can do with as you please. They were only meant to be helpful. :D Take care and I enjoyed this fic. :D
| agipe chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
I am surprised Bella can hold a conversation while going through the transformation. Sucks that Alice had to be the one to tell her. :(
| agipe chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
I am glad Sam doesn't want to start a war over this. I hope Jake cools down. I am sure Bella will need him once she wakes up!
| agipe chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
Poor Carlisle. I can see why he would feel so bad about changing her. A life time without Edward, and always being with his family, will be hard.
| agipe chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
This story seems very under rated for the great writing I have seen in the first few chapters. I am hoping to help change that! This story has me interested so far!
| GracefulDemon chapter 28 . 11/3/2011
This is not a Carlisle/Bella story.
I am sorry to say that the ending was far too short and it disappointed me.
I expected more from this story.
| Sassyvampmama chapter 28 . 8/22/2011
| CentauRita chapter 28 . 5/5/2011
I tried to keep an open mind when you prefaced the chappie with an A/N explaining its 'bittersweetness and is rather open to interpretation especially at the end.'
I wish you would have had stepped up to the plate and knocked this story...O U T!
Too much was left OPEN for interpretation. I felt the ending, for me, left me unsatisfied.
Just a suggestion. You are the author. There is no right or wrong way to end a story. Be strong and true to your writing and choose the ending. Don't be wishywashy and leave everything OPEN to interpretation...as your reader & reviewer...please take this under consideration for your future endeavors. You will consistantly have more satisfied readers.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading Ivory and Gold. I know with a stronger decisive ending I would have LOVED it.**Just as much as Bella loved Carlisle and her Edward ;)**
Take Care & Happy Writing
| CentauRita chapter 27 . 5/5/2011
**Will wonders ever cease to amaze me...Esme and her all encompassing love. To forgive Carlisle and still be able to allow Bella to stay with the family coven...Its. Just. WOW! She is so amazing.**
| CentauRita chapter 26 . 5/5/2011
**Please, pass me a tissue. :'( This chappie is too emotionally intense!**
| CentauRita chapter 25 . 5/5/2011
'such passion, such desperation. They pulled from each other slowly, communicating every unspoken word with their eyes.'
"Go to your wife." He nodded at her, wanting tears to form as she left the room.'
**Ye'p', this passage kinda sums it all up.**
| CentauRita chapter 24 . 5/5/2011
**Lifting both of my hands and covering both of my 'I can't look...please just tell me when it's over'...OMG**
| CentauRita chapter 23 . 5/5/2011
"This changes nothing Bella. I still want you."
He grinned half joking with her, trying to lighten the situation just a fraction.
"You'll regret this Carlisle. We both will."
**OMG! Poor Esme**