Reviews for Trully Unexpected
Wesfanemt333 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Interesting story, could use a little proofreading though. Maybe using a beta reader?

Anyway, keep trying, practice makes perfect.
SkyeGavin chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
Here is a list of conducts that should always be observed:

1. Spell check all story and poetry. There is no excuse for not performing this duty. If you do not have a word processor that has the spell checking feature, use a search engine such as Google to find one.

2. Proofread all entries for grammar and other aspects of writing before submission. 'Hot off the press' content is often riddled with errors. No one is perfect but it is the duty of the writer to perform to the best of his/her ability.

5. Use proper textual formatting. For example: using only capital letters in the story title, summary, or content is not only incorrect but also a disregard for the language itself.
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
haha thanks for the songs for the other ones! they are really good songs! D

anyways back to the story! ...

AHH that was great! i loved it!

this is so strange... but strange in a good way! haha...

ok so sense there is another chapter! im going to read more! haha! woo!

i cant wait! lmao! D