Reviews for Free Falling
jessi chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Great story!
XDarkAngelOfLoveX chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Beautiful! I loved it!
jadedsiren chapter 1 . 5/28/2011

totally fit the pic and was a great moment between them. coodles:)
elleelle chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
awww. that was too cute.
Oro chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
i don't know how many times i have read this now...but i fall more and more in love in whit it every time!

- you are a genius!
vgabor chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
great story great idea. Loved It!
Flor chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Wonderful! I love the way you write. I'm going to see the fanart.
Soul Lilly chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Itzeen 131285 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Like the short story... avery deep one, keep doing more, i love this pairing
Lady-Indis chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Fantastic, as usual :) It makes their relationship a bit more real to me; I always had a hard time seeing them together. (Yes, I'm a major yaoi fan.. at least when it comes to G/V...;p)

But this was so realistic, and instantly let me see it as it could have been! I loved all of their banter, and Vegy's response to being lied to was totally awesome.
TrinityTepes chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Love it.

And even before I

read this story I actually

knew what fanart you were

talking about because i

had seen it before.

I love how you made a story to

go with it.
crazysmile15 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
hopelesslydemented chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Good one! Perhaps you can play more with the words you use to add more color to the story, and also work on the flow of the narration. Overall it was well done. :)
Unlisshed chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Hey, this is really good, and I loved every bit of it. You capture Bulma and Vegeta's relationship perfectly. This is going straight to my favs, Thanks for such a great story, I'm going to check out the inspiration for it now! :)
BlackLight81 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Another great story! You do a wonderful job keeping everyone in character and believable. Looking forward to the Bardock story :)
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