|Reviews for The Art of Deception|
| moodymel chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Really nice story. Good job!
| mokonahapuuuuuu chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Wow, your writing style's very impressive... I like. :) Emotions, show not tell... It's all here. If my senses were any sharper to really give what to work on, I'd say this is absouletly perfect. :D . Great job! . And I'm a tad jealous of Ana because she gets to nab James (played by Christopher Eccleston), but this is fiction... not real life. XD haha
I was a tad curious where the prison is and it's on a big military ship called USS Flagg. Just found that out on Wiki. :O Now I know what to put in while writing. .
Keep up the great work! :) Can't wait to see more writing from you. :)
| Taladarkiejj chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
This was great. Loved it. Like some of your reviewers already said, this is how the movie should've ended.
I also would love to see a sequel or just a longer story. :)
So please, do write more James/Ana goodness!
| Ninja chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
This was good, but I'm more of a Duke/Ana person so I wasn't that fond of the James/Ana thng. Anyway it was good but not my type of story. In my mind, Ana and Duke 4ever! But I liked it.
| Mark R. Whitten chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
I like that you chose Anna for this story cause I like her best. I don't agree with the choices and all, as my favorite part of the movie was Anna's redemption. I don't cling to the original work like the die-hard fans, but I understand where they come from in terms of what they want.
Still, I have to wonder if you wrote it this way because you didn't like the way the movie ended or because you wanted Anna to be evil again.
| bloodhawk268 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Now that's how the movie should have ended!
| god story chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I really lioved this. It fixed the problems with the characters and opened the movie-verse to much more plausible sequels. Too bad they didn't actually finish it like this.
| Totenkinder Madchen chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Excellent work! I was very disappointed in the way the movie treated Destro and the Baroness, but this story did a great job of bringing the whole thing back into line. Winning the trust of the Joes and then planning to break out Destro and Cobra Commander . . . that's very much in line with the Baroness we know.
A-plus, would read again. :D
| Imortalis chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
loved it! I really hope there is going to be more!
| JasonLeeScottFan chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
That was beautiful! Are you going to do a sequel? I really hope so! I'd love to see what happens next!
| Prexistence chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I LOVE this, I couldn't stand her being brainwashed into doing those things, the Baroness was not nice and shouldn't be nice! and most of all, she should have loved Destro (not Duke) on her own free will! thank you so much for writing this and i SO hope you decide to continue, maybe having her break them out like suggested at the end little revenge on the Joe's kinda thing!
| pmgiff chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
PERFECT! Thank you so much for writing this. It "fixes" the horrible ending in the movie of Baroness/Ana turning to the "good side"... This is exactly how I would have pictured it happening. She is "playing" them, just waiting for her chance to free CC/Rex and her real love, Destro/James. KUDOS!
| Asterisk78 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Very haunting. I especially liked the implication that Ana likes to be bad/hasn't quite gotten over the nanomites. Great job!
| xt1me chapter 1 . 8/17/2009