|Reviews for Finding Yourself|
| Robert Teague chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
This is a good start.
Good emotional content, both between Bonnie and Tara, and within themselves. Bonnie wanting to trust Tara, but not quite sure about it, leaves a good random factor to affect events to come.
Many writers have found Bonnie to be worth redeeming, and many are well written stories, no matter what they put her through to get there.
However, you might want to consider a bit of editing. Tara picks up Bonnie, and is taking her to a cafe. It's mentioned they are approaching the cafe, then suddenly Bonnie is out of the car going to her house. Either the cafe scene was left out, or they changed their minds and the reader wasn't told. This needs correcting.
Looking forward to more!