|Reviews for The Little Box|
| Lady Heliotrope chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Nice tale indeed!
| LunaLGood chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Could you write more of Luna and Snape? maybe continue this?
I love it!
| AngelHeartOfMine chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Aww! The ending was really cute. I think this is going to be my new favorite pairing )
| Amber-Jade James chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
i loved your storie! i never thought i would like this pairing but it is growing on me, you should write more about them!
| hana koikogoro chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
what is DH complaint?
| Parsley the Lion chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
This is silly, but I like it anyway. Quite well written.
| whitehound chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Ah - I wondered if it was Luna, she has the right sort of self-contained detachment and vague superiority. Very nice.
Karkaroff was meant to be dead, btw - although I suppose he could have faked it.
I spotted a few typoes your friend missed -
"When the reached the row of chairs" - should be "When they..."
"she had to reign in the impulse" - should be "rein in", like a horse, you know?
"lined on most of it's bank" - should be "its", no apostrophe.
| Arabea chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Hey, you said they would be only friends in this story! And, also, the thought of Snape lauging makes me twitch a little. Okay...a lot. / I finded some boo-boos. Since you're such a good friend, I thought I'd point them out. You're welcome in advance. D
I don't want to here a word about how you don't want to.
Here should be hear
They looked at her oddly and were too shocked at off-center to respond.
At should be and
“And why wouldn't I come, Severus? Did you expect me to leave you hear all alone?
Hear should be here
| attyfan chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Very nice. I wish it had happened this way.