|Reviews for The Day the Numenoreans Left|
| Baelorfan chapter 1 . 2/26
The future Ar Pharazon up to his tricks?
| zedille chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Evidently even the best of intentions can't make up for all the time that the Númenoreans had spent turned away from Elves, and their diplomatic mission was really doomed from the start, though in such a hilarious way! That parrot... and then poor Gil-galad, my goodness. I only wish Elrond had been there to see, his reaction would have been priceless. Even so, we see the hints of the oncoming darkness - Pharazon's comments about defeating Sauron, and Celebrimbor's sword... if this was really the root of Pharazon's actions later, it would really have been better if they hadn't come, as you point out in the last line. If only all they had to worry about were parrots!)
| Asterisk78 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
| Clodia chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Thank you, that was hilarious! I loved the parrot and the various misadventures of all and sundry. Some nice dark touches as well, Celebrimbor's sword especially. Thank you!