Reviews for Treason
MoonHowler557 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
This is one of the best stories I've ever read so far! KEEP IT UP! ; )
Plazmatik chapter 7 . 5/19/2010
Still like Sly and Neyla better (WHich surprises me that I haven't seen one yet...hmm..) anyway. Good story. Gonna have to check out your others.

Plazmatik chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
THe one time he decides to leave a calling card. Dummy. Lol

Good stuff. Really enjoying the story.

No real errors other than the fight scene could've been a bit more over the top.


The Good Thief chapter 7 . 8/23/2009
Vundevar story Scot and thanks for putting Brown in it.
erasethisaccountdeleteit chapter 7 . 8/22/2009
I'll miss them JackandNeyla are cool

Fanfictionlover4444 chapter 7 . 8/22/2009
Well thats an interesting turn of events, i loved this story though it doesnt appear to have a full ending (mainly with freddy) but i loved to see whatever might happen next time. but oh well. thanks for writing such an interesting piece of writing that focuses on the idea of loyalty towards law and compassion towards life.
ravioli-jo chapter 7 . 8/22/2009
I WILL MISS THEM!.!.!.!.!.!.!

Awesome story by the way!

erasethisaccountdeleteit chapter 6 . 8/22/2009
AWESOME! Wilson and Sly on thr run

ravioli-jo chapter 6 . 8/22/2009

I LOVE it!

That was thrilling and action packed and just cool!

erasethisaccountdeleteit chapter 5 . 8/22/2009
Freddy is getting what he deserves LoL Wilson will be saved by Carmelita I bet.

The Good Thief chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
Sorry for not reading this I've been caught up in school.

Anywho, I wish you would have put Cody in this story. Because that would give him the idea to run on the lamb and join Cooper which would show how he got connected to the maricale job... I think.

And personnaly I think he just belongs in the team. I mean he's been there all the times before. Use him if you want.
ravioli-jo chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
. .ww, I'm gonna cry!

Stupid Freddy! You screwed everything up!

He should be sent to Hades for 50 years and then hung!

erasethisaccountdeleteit chapter 4 . 8/20/2009

ravioli-jo chapter 4 . 8/20/2009

OH-NO! Carmelita you are certainly making a mess of things

ravioli-jo chapter 3 . 8/19/2009
Uh-oh, Carmelita is going on a arrest-a-cop-rampage!.!

Shame shame Carmelita! You should trust your team!

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