|Reviews for Trust, Loyalty, Commitment|
| CirenDePeti chapter 2 . 5/2/2012
It's so weird reading a story about Tallahassee when I live here. Cafe Cabernet closed earlier this year and is being replaced with a sports bar and I'm pretty sure I've never heard any of the officers speak with a southern lilt. That may just be because the only other place I've ever lived was Texas.
| Blair.Alice. CullenLuvr chapter 40 . 4/24/2012
| Gamegirl452 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Awesome story with such an original take. Thank you x
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| fanficgirl8 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
me gustó mucho el primer capítulo! :)
| annaharding chapter 38 . 4/5/2012
Awesome story! A friend rec'd it to me, and I've been spending this whole weekend reading it straight through. (Sorry I didn't stop to review.)
I'm glad they are finally married and can finally "do" it. I was kind of getting mad at Bella. She seemed too much of a tease at times - it's not nice to do all that she did and get Edward so excitedly worked up, and then stop, because she wanted to remain "pure" until marriage. My personal feeling is that she was pushing him too much and being to much of a tease. But your chapter here at least showed that he understood and was OK with it all. ("With sex off the table, he'd been able to grow to love her without the complications that it brought to relationships...)
Thanx for this reading enjoyment!
| akjamma chapter 40 . 4/2/2012
| mimigirl chapter 24 . 3/27/2012
Hi reviewing on my mobile, so the connection is bad. This is the first chapter that the connection has been able to open the review button. Wanted to tell you that I'm loving the story and just started reading it a few hours ago. Keep up the good work.
| sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
wow can't wait to read more!
| imwithemmett chapter 40 . 3/17/2012
Aww copward is so cute.
| edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 chapter 40 . 3/16/2012
So beautiful! Amazing job! I cannot wait for more! Xoxoxoxoxoxo
| edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 chapter 38 . 3/16/2012
Absolutely beautiful story! Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
| imwithemmett chapter 36 . 3/16/2012
I am so so glad Bella was able to save herself from being raped. I was almost convinced from some of your earlier warnings that she wasn't going to be saved from that.
| imwithemmett chapter 35 . 3/16/2012
Jane and Demetri! I had thought of Jane (aka Jan Demetri's fiancée?) Earlier but discounted her because I couldn't figure out a motive. I would think she would be more focused on Edward's mother and Edward. I would assume she wouldn't know which officer actually shot her father.
| imwithemmett chapter 34 . 3/16/2012
The woman is? Tanya? Irina? Someone completely unknown?
| imwithemmett chapter 33 . 3/16/2012
My money is on Demerti being the one on the phone in the bathroom.