|Reviews for Trust, Loyalty, Commitment|
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 10 . 12/6/2014
well he just threw his hat in the ring and let James know he was interested in Bella that's great.
| jk chapter 16 . 12/4/2014
She likes him more cause he knows black history...but he only knows it cause he was banging some black girl...god Bella, run!
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 9 . 12/6/2014
I don't care ho ou do it but let Bella dump him she needs to be with Edward he can be with Tanya or you can find Victoria for him just not Bella.
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 8 . 12/6/2014
in other words her second husband just loved her money not her not good I would say.
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 7 . 12/6/2014
Edward finally admits he wants Bella not just have sex with her that right there is a good start
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 6 . 12/6/2014
well Edwards eyes are green there by being the green eyed monster[snicker]
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 5 . 12/6/2014
god let hope she does not get into James don't think it would be ood for her.
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 4 . 12/6/2014
he was just doing his job plus I think it sort of scared him that Bella might have been hurt.
| jk chapter 12 . 12/4/2014
This is all so believable ...the FBI letting a street cop in as a sniper for a sting...yaaaa okkkkk doesn't matter his ooray bullshit he's a fucking street cop with a lame beat...this shits not believable...and Bella can make out with Edward with no quims but she freaks when James barely kisses and holds her...ya real angsty lol theres no angst at all cause her choice was made from the beginning...all your accomplishing is making me hate Bella cause she's soooo stupid
| jk chapter 11 . 12/4/2014
You could at least make'us'think that there's a chance for'james...cause what the hell is'the'point when we'all'know James has no chance in hell? And Edwards tattoo is beautiful? And she kissed? What the hell? What a freak...u dont'know'paul Bella so why in the hell are you kissing' a tattoo about him? Esward should run back to Tanya cause bellas'clingy as hell
| jk chapter 10 . 12/4/2014
Edwards gross. Bella doesn't needs a ducked up manwhore with daddy and mommy issues plus commitment issues
And you keep implying how many woman he's been with...lots...but how many is that? 15? 25? 50? More? How many? How many STDs has he had? How many kids? Near misses?
| jk chapter 9 . 12/4/2014
Edward said he doesnt want to be with you Bella soooo fucking let it go you pathetic clingy girl!
| jk chapter 8 . 12/4/2014
Is this all church church church? Why does Bella talk like 40 year old woman? Why is it that Bella doesn't mind that Edwards a whore? Shell save her virgunity for a manwhore? Really, what's the point of that? Stuuuuupid
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 3 . 12/5/2014
well shit I don't think either one of them knows this but they will be together and probley married as well just saying
| jk chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
Like you really needed to put a definition for down low! Lol
And yaaaa um sure she inherited some rhythm from her black roots lol lots of white people have rhythm