Reviews for Trust, Loyalty, Commitment
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 14 . 12/6/2014
YES YES she got rid of James lets hope he don't do anything stupid. now go tell Edward please NOW
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 13 . 12/6/2014
why don't she just admit she is in love with Edward cause she is now let her tell him and then tell James to take a hike
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 12 . 12/6/2014
he saved his mother she's fine just so now what is left to do.a sprained now what is left to do will this end here or more trouble.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 11 . 12/6/2014
just how does James know what church Edward goes to or don't go to.I do not like James or want him to be wih Bella or even near her.
jk chapter 19 . 12/4/2014
So Edwards how's show up one gropes him, he gets hard and Bella turns it up? Duck that. Bella can do netter the whoreward
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 10 . 12/6/2014
well he just threw his hat in the ring and let James know he was interested in Bella that's great.
jk chapter 16 . 12/4/2014
She likes him more cause he knows black history...but he only knows it cause he was banging some black girl...god Bella, run!
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 9 . 12/6/2014
I don't care ho ou do it but let Bella dump him she needs to be with Edward he can be with Tanya or you can find Victoria for him just not Bella.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 8 . 12/6/2014
in other words her second husband just loved her money not her not good I would say.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 7 . 12/6/2014
Edward finally admits he wants Bella not just have sex with her that right there is a good start
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 6 . 12/6/2014
well Edwards eyes are green there by being the green eyed monster[snicker]
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 5 . 12/6/2014
god let hope she does not get into James don't think it would be ood for her.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 4 . 12/6/2014
he was just doing his job plus I think it sort of scared him that Bella might have been hurt.
jk chapter 12 . 12/4/2014
This is all so believable ...the FBI letting a street cop in as a sniper for a sting...yaaaa okkkkk doesn't matter his ooray bullshit he's a fucking street cop with a lame beat...this shits not believable...and Bella can make out with Edward with no quims but she freaks when James barely kisses and holds her...ya real angsty lol theres no angst at all cause her choice was made from the beginning...all your accomplishing is making me hate Bella cause she's soooo stupid
jk chapter 11 . 12/4/2014
You could at least make'us'think that there's a chance for'james...cause what the hell is'the'point when we'all'know James has no chance in hell? And Edwards tattoo is beautiful? And she kissed? What the hell? What a freak...u dont'know'paul Bella so why in the hell are you kissing' a tattoo about him? Esward should run back to Tanya cause bellas'clingy as hell
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