Reviews for Love Amongst the Embers
KissingKorpses chapter 1 . 6/4/2010

'Would you like another comb?'
Schwann chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Makes me wonder if Zuko had some Fire Nation showing of intentions custom by the gift giving. Like the water tribe necklace, only more seductive. Silently making a pass at her, hoping to accept it. Heh.
Shadowhawke chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Wow. Hot and beautiful, and I thought that the conversation part of this story especially was amazingly true to the characters! Great work.

Boriqua-chan chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
wow... nice...
Somedudewithaname chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
CRAP! I cant see my screen through this steam :)
Rogue Rikku chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I want an encore. - I love this fic and even though it was a one-shot, it didn't seemed rushed at all. Can't wait to read more of your work.
Beautiful Jade chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Great job! This was a very well written story. I would review a thousands times if I could.

- Beautiful J
DELETED113213213 chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Spicy hot! I love love love this story! The well written interaction between Zuko and Katara, the great leading up to the hot sex, and the overall smooth writing was a nice treat.
The Crushinator chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
*fans self*

Oh but I do love your smut. Clothes-on sex is a big yes for me.
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
*smirk* Nicely done. You've got talent with making lemons!
BlueArcticWolf chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
I love Zutara, and when the end of the show came around, I asure you I was one of the many who tore their hair and screamed like a crazy person at the injustice of it all. So, this was a wonderful alternate to the ending. I think something like this should have happened... And I think you have a great talent for writing. This was very much enjoyed, as were your other ATLA stories. I hope to see more soon!

bloodyrose1294 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
I can only press the favorite button once, too bad it won't let me choose it 20times :D
MarisolM chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Very passionate and well-written! The whole scene in the master bedroom reminded me of Aang's nightmare in "Nightmares & Daydreams," when Katara was being consumed by fire. Katara's actually being enveloped into Fire Nation culture... and she's not complaining. ) Good job. Very symbolic.
Eternal Contradiction chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Encore? God, yes please. You definitely NEED to write more Zutara smut. Like now?

I'm serious, though. This is one of the best ones I've come across.
Dust to Dusk chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
There were a lot of elements in this story that I lied: Katara dealing with her Aang issues, the intimacy of Katara and Zuko sharing emotions and experiences, and even the comb was a nice touch. And, of course, the sex was good. X3 If I were to make any suggestion, it would be to take advantage of the symbolism of the location. Considering they were making love in the Fire Lord and Lady's private chambers, I was expecting some comment or supposition about Zuko and Katara being the next Lord and Lady (and there fore the rightful users of said chambers). But yeah... That's just my random thought. Thanks for the good read!
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