|Reviews for A Life More Ordinary|
| wmadavis chapter 57 . 3/5
This is a great story. I wish you would pick it up again.
| 0.0-MIDNIGHTROSE-0.0 chapter 57 . 1/29
I really hope you come back to this story! I love it and have been reading it for weeks! I don't know what to do with my life anymore...please update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
I really hope you return to finish the story at some point but this is one of my favourite HP fanfics. The relationship between Remus and Sirius is well-crafted as is the wonderful father-son relationship that Sirius has with Harry. :)
| Memories-consume2332 chapter 38 . 12/30/2013
The tears that you have brought to my eyes with this story is un-real. It has been a very long time since any story has brought any sort of emotion out of me. You also have a very good writing style. I do not know how to explain it, but i do enjoy how you write, and the way you go about it. I have read all the way to chapter 38 without stopping, but I am emotionally drained and afraid that I must get some sleep before i miss something. I do not leave comments on stories very often but I felt that I must for yours. I am so glad that I stumbled upon your story. Have a fantastic New Year, and thank you.
| rutabaga9 chapter 6 . 12/11/2013
Fucking SLASH: "Sirius was close enough to feel the warmth from Remus' lips; they were
If you wanna write that crap, fine. But have the fucking guts to tell people up front.
SLASH means something to many. For me, it means my memories of my creepy uncle taking me on trips and giving me gifts in preparation for trying to seduce me. It means the fat Italian chicken-hawk in the Milano train station, and the skinny one in Palermo, who years ago sidled up next to me and tried to watch me pee. It means the perverts with prison-pussy beards who tried to chat up my 14 year old son each and every time he tried to jog in the park. It means the same disgusting red-neck queers hitting on me, anytime I walked without my wife.
I've worked with homosexuals just fine. We don't talk about my sex life OR theirs, and that's the way I want it to stay.
But discovering that the Sirius in your story is queer . . . after he's 'cuddled' up to Harry is inexpressibly disgusting. You can cite all the PC claims that queers aren't pedophiles you want - I've encountered the real life truth about those fuckers.
It's a free Internet. If you want to write SLASH, that's your choice. But have the stinking guts to warn people BEFORE they start reading about your pedophile fantasy-land.
In real life? If I catch you doing that shit to someone I care about, odds are, the police will NOT be involved.
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Poor Harry ...
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| SakuraKoi chapter 13 . 11/5/2013
Oh no poor Harry