Reviews for Together
Diamond-Raven chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Wow, this was an absolutely stunning and heartbreaking poem! I've never served in the armed forces or really done anything where I had to put my life on the line for the sake of others, but it is something I've explored in the fics I write and this poem expresses everything that such an action entails beautifully. This poem is especially meaningful given what's going on the world today. I especially loved the lines "Together, we fight to live for what you believed in. Together we carry on your strength so that all may live, knowing you do not." That part nearly made me cry! I have to admit I don't know much about poetry, but this poem was stunning. I'm very flattered that my story inspired such an amazing piece of writing! Thank you for being inspired, and thank you for writing this.
Samandjackforever chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Wow...nice work! that seems to capture the story well! _ Can you make a poem for one of my fanfics sometime? _

~Danielle