|Reviews for Uncovering the veil of darkness|
| Lion in the Land chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
Hey there, oh thou of the Obsidian Heart. I'm happy to see you haven't abandoned this story.
Nice second installment - I like that Jonathan is in denial about the vampire thing, and it will be interesting to see how he handles it when reality sinks in. What I love though, is that this childe is able to make Selene shudder. ;) Jeannette seems like an interesting character too.
I hope all is well with you and that you're having a great summer.
| Lion in the Land chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Hey! Nice intro. Short, sweet and sexeh. ;)
Your descriptions are all very good and I think that this passage manages to pack in a lot of intensity. You have my interest, and I'm looking very forward to seeing what you have in store for us.
Congratulations on your first ever fanfiction posting!