another thing, what tanya did, edward let her out of jail?
she kidnapped a baby! that is a crime! AND she tried to pass
it on as his and edward let her go cuz he didn't feel she should
be in a small room? THAT IS SIMPLY DUMB!
he should be livid, he should hate her! he LOVES HER? WTF!
i imagine the writer is a young kid who doesnt understand
right from wrong? her emotional state hasnt matured yet?
this whole story doesn't make a lick of sense! too many wrongs,
too many illogical and irrational moments.
the writing itself isnt too bad. just the topics of cause & effects within are COMPLETELY
NONSENSICAL!

this is completely stupid.
first, edward cheats on tanya with bella. then he loves them both.
then he cheats on bella with a fuck buddy. WTF?
through all of this, bella loves and forgives edward way too easily.
it's edward who pulls away constantly and bella is so
pathetic to take him back without any problems.
it's a complete idiocy for bella to be so pathetic.
i can't stand it anymore.
good luck.

Boring

cant wait for more

Please continue

omg omg omg i have 1 thing to say FUCK YOU PASCALE! :'( he only wanted me for sex but i like him more than that, its been 9 mnths since sjfdjkgfjngjkgjngf.

THIS IS A GREAT STORY! :D

James?

I loved your story a lot!

Ok so he could barely walk to the bed but he carried Bella and ran up the stairs?

Hmm

Its not finished!

love it..

love it

great cant wait to read more

ah this story is driving me insane its like a god damn roller coster right when you think its going good something happens and i could kill edward for cheating again he is such an ass even though i get why he did it but that piss me of cause its fine when a guy does it but if a girl does it we get called whores what the hell is that about

oh my god i fuckin love u right now

finally not a story tht she just takes him back after he did something horrible

sure she took him back but she used him

AH! that was amazing

loved it