Reviews for A Litany at Dusk
LaPumuckl chapter 18 . 3/20/2014
The little argument with the pack members was funny, but if you prefer the wolves to win, you'd be terribly disappointed;) good thing I'm all team Edward:)

A poor guy, that must be a HARD time for him being with his family like that...
LaPumuckl chapter 17 . 3/20/2014
Damn that was hot!

I can't believe how much he risked by going to rescue sweet, little Chrystal... And he haven't had kissed her before that, just think about what both could've lost if you weren't such a generous author;)
LaPumuckl chapter 16 . 3/20/2014
Leave it to Emmett to put something funny into a conversation;)
But I'm glad he's not holding a grudge against Edward for the fight with Rose...

I guess it went better with Bella than he expected. That's good
LaPumuckl chapter 15 . 3/20/2014
You bet I review;)

What happened between the monsignore and Edward? There are two possibilities I have come up with instantaneously: 1. He's a vampire himself - but that's unlikely in my opinion because Bella seemed to know him well enough to have shaken his hand more times than once (but she met Carlisle too without being suspicious)
2. And more to my own sad experiences with men from the Catholic Church - he's not a good man and Edward saw his misdeeds in his mind...

I like the way Bella is around him, she see's more than she lets him know about him;)
LaPumuckl chapter 14 . 3/19/2014
Rosalie seems to be as we know her, as most of your characters. And with her feelings about being changed, I get that it would be upsetting for her to hear of Edwards plans...
But in thought of respect, she should have tried to listen to his whole plan before attacking him like that;)

I liked Jasper's tips! It was funny what he told him and I think that kind of humor was what Edward needed to hear;)
LaPumuckl chapter 13 . 3/19/2014
Poor guy to offer her food in a strip club? But I guess he got himself redeemed fast enough with the Starbucks;)

Hm... Whom did she run from in her nightmare?!
LaPumuckl chapter 12 . 3/19/2014
I'm always impressed with what analogies some authors come up! This about the swan... Just another example...
LaPumuckl chapter 11 . 3/19/2014
Hm... And so it began:)
LaPumuckl chapter 10 . 3/19/2014
I'm impressed with the advices he received and was laughing at their remarks about him falling in love...
LaPumuckl chapter 9 . 3/19/2014
Shit that was... Incredible
LaPumuckl chapter 8 . 3/19/2014
I don't think he'll spare the life of these guys... And I don't blame him if he goes through with it!
LaPumuckl chapter 7 . 3/19/2014
This is one if the rare stories where Tanya sing completely possessed by thei thought of getting Edward for herself. And I like the way she made him see what HE wants!
LaPumuckl chapter 6 . 3/19/2014
That was interesting, this priest believing she saw SOMETHING, but not entirely sure it was good...
LaPumuckl chapter 5 . 3/18/2014
Once again I'm impressed about his inner strength!
LaPumuckl chapter 4 . 3/18/2014
Talk about being insensitive and you picture this Jake...
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