|Reviews for McSmokey|
| Cassandra Echizen chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Hahahaha lol ;)
| notyeraveragenerd chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
She sounded a lot like Karin hahaha.
It's cute tho. Thank you for writing :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
Lol :D loved it
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Very good... Your writing style is very good and professional... You should do it more often.
| Kiiki chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Girl! You are AMAZING x TEN!
| ellz chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
| ImpossibleHumanParadise chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
That was so cool. I loved the last bit, with the 2 tubes of toothpaste. Cool. Hey, if you have time and want, can u please check out my what if story? I would really like the opinion of such a good author. Please?
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Lolz. I hope i get to have my non-smoking prince charming that easy though. Ecckk! I hate smokes too :/
| TigerLilyette chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
oooooh I liike lol(;
| What I wrote chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This is amusing xD could be longer, though. Wouldn't have minded that at all ;-)
| monsterbleeds chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
This is genius XDD
I love it
| zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
| Scanty chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
That was definitely very cute and sweet. :3
| 070 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
AHAHAHA. I love this spazzy, high-on-life (and Sasuke's sexy chest, pahaha) Sakura. And her perverted little comments cracked me up, too. OH, and that last line Sasuke said? Using two tubes of toothpaste to get rid of the smell? I JUST FELL A LITTLE BIT MORE IN LOVE. Because I totally get Sakura's thing about super hot guys who SEEM really awesome until you see them smoke a cigarette and then it's like, ugh. Why.
I'm not sure I've managed to make any sense, but this was pretty freaking awesome. :D