|Reviews for Unintentional|
| Angelstarshimmer chapter 5 . 10/16/2011
oh my gosh! Story is kinda sad but good I hope elliot and olivia can mend there relationship I would love to read on. Doesn't have to be happly ever after but a little happyness would be ok
| Angelstarshimmer chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
my mind went blank and things went black must kill kathy must kill kathy! she has got to die! I hate her so much right now! lol good story though so far!
| redorchid23 chapter 5 . 7/12/2011
| edge15684 chapter 5 . 9/29/2009
come on I can't believe Elliot did this to her. He better make it all better. I really don't know how they will make it through this.
| cheerleader2006 chapter 4 . 8/28/2009
I hope that you continue this soon! Very good story so far! :)
| edge15684 chapter 4 . 8/28/2009
wow she had a miscarriage... That is so sad. Maybe it's for the best I mean after what happened maybe they need a break from each other. I don't want to but he needs to explain why he did what he did.
| Sarah chapter 3 . 8/27/2009
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE AND NOT JUST ONE GOD PLEASE NOT ONE!
| demonicangel chapter 3 . 8/26/2009
Please update this, really started getting into it!
Need to know what happens!
| CrimeSceneDna chapter 3 . 8/23/2009
Poor Liv, hope the baby is okay. Can't wait to find out
| edge15684 chapter 3 . 8/22/2009
I hope they can work it out. They are having a baby. He needs to find a way to explain everything to her.
| elsatheicequeen chapter 3 . 8/22/2009
WOW! This story is great! Keep it up!
| drummajor15 chapter 2 . 8/20/2009
Good so far updat soon
| cheerleader2006 chapter 2 . 8/20/2009
I like this story so far! Can't wait to read more!
| edge15684 chapter 2 . 8/19/2009
I don't like when they are fighting. I'm not sure I will like this story but keep going
| CrimeSceneDna chapter 2 . 8/19/2009
The chapters seemed to get a bit mucked up some how, I see chapter 1 as 2 and 2 as 1 if that makes sense lol. Anyway good continuation, still interested to see where you take this.