That was a great story. The first chapter as he falls for her and she first him set a great tone. Thst we heard noth if their thoughts were wonderful. That we see he has changed his lifestyle at thg he end if chapter was icing on the cake.
The second chapter dealing with Sabrina and not saying anything as a parent is so hard and you nailed it.

I enjoyed it!

I would love to see more of them, their lives, & where they go from here.

He ended up with a wonderful, unconventional family. I'm glad Edward went with his gut and followed his heart into their lives.

liked this!

Awe, damn seems unfinished. Wish there was more, but thanks for writing.

Surprise, it's a two-shot! I liked the glimpse into their future. Loved reading that Edward is fully one hundred percent committed to Bella and her children. I was sad to read that Bella dismisses his true feelings, due to his age. She believes he loves her. She just expects him to leave her. She may need therapy to help her with that. I liked this second half.

She had him securely wrapped around her little finger, within moment of seeing her. They hadn't even spoke to one another yet and he was smitten. That night in that hotel room, changed him forever. Very good one-shot. Thank you for sharing it with us here.

Love it.

Brilliant just wish it was longer

LOVED IT! Shot right up in my Top Ten all-time favorite. Please, please, please continue this story! Like Id love to read the proposal or a future take with more kids...

Sweet loved them both. xx

HOW OLD ARE BELL AND EDWARD WHO IS THE GIRLS FATERANDWHYWONT THEY TELL HER ABOUT IM WHY DID THY THER O TELL HER BELLA'S X HUSAND WASNT HER FATHER I TH FIRST PLACE.

THAT WS CUTE AND I REALL LIKED IT A LOT THANK YOU

Great story, thanks for sharring