Reviews for Paper Flower
elusivetwilight chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
That. Was. Amazing.

I think what made it for me was that you were so realistic about it. Everything from Bella's emotions and the way Edward slowly broke through every last one of her defences...all the way to the ending. I loved made it hot without letting it be seedy or without the anatomy lesson.

Edward was so masculine and the awkward moments he had were refreshing! It gave him more dimension rather than the usual I'M THE DUDE APPEARING IN THIS ONE SHOT. YOU KNOW THIS BECAUSE I AM PERPETUALLY HARD THE WHOLE TIME.


The imperfections on both sides (and I'm not referring to the curves on our curvy girl at all...) made this perfect.

Thank you for writing, I really enjoyed this!
7 Ace chapter 2 . 12/11/2011
I like that he's moved in with Bella :) Uh oh, I hope that Sabrina and Edward can be close. I'd hate to grow up with not knowing that my real dad isn't the one I grew up with. LOL "suddenly I'm 12..." lol midgets on tricycles lol I definitely had my childhood taken from me and if F***ing sucks. Every child should at least meet their father first fathering moment for Edward. I think that the part where Edward and Bella are on the phone is funny. haha she's disappointed that it's not a ring lol. How old are Edward and Bella? Are you going to continue this or is this over?
E's My Brand Of Heroin chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Oh yes, this is much more my speed. I'm such a wuss. I want to read your other stuff, I do, but I have a feeling I couldn't handle them. Your first chapter of WtLW made me want to cry- not you, me- but this I can do. Wasn't expecting it, but I'm happy.
angelspinknose chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
loved it.
Darcyfan14 chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
Darcyfan14 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Awesome chapter,sexy and HOTTTTT!
Iklepixie chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
All it takes is the live of a woman to become the Edward of your dreams
kstar0330 chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
Loved it!
kstar0330 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
MagicBliss chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
LOVE LOVE LOVE. Love that you showed us reality. Love that you kept it real. Fantastic!

These two are adorable. I am sad that it's marked complete because this is one of those stories that I'd love to see more. I realize it's mostly smut, but that's just fine with me. Don't get me wrong. I enjoy a plot-filled story just as much as the next girl, but the porn is like icing on the cake.


MagicBliss chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Oh, hot shit. GAH! Exactly what I needed on a lazy Sunday evening.

Bella is perfect. Curvy and all woman. Such a turn on. Fantastic! And Edward was a dream.

This little story is extremely sexy and sensual... and so sweet.


JustARead chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I love that you made B a real woman, thick, curvy, not a size 0... And it was hot, btw ;)
shoefreak37 chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
Daddyward! How cute was that? The stress over dealing with a preteen was adorable.

Just how much older is Bella than Edward in this?

It's completely endearing how Edward has thrown himself into the relationship with Bella. I love it. I'm sure they'll have a long happy life together, right?

Thanks so much for writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this fluffy fic. :) Great job.
shoefreak37 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Aw, this is so sexy, sweet and heartwarming.

You did an amazing job with this! I can't believe I hadn't read it sooner.

Thank you so much for writing!
ssarrahh chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
OH! I really REALLY liked this. Nice little one shot. I'm going to read the next chapter now.. Is it some sort of outtake?

I guess I'll be finding the answer to that one shortly!

Thanks again (:

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