|Reviews for Naruto: Bone Pulse|
| T'086421 chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
Asuma's team number is 10
| thenick10841 chapter 6 . 10/3/2012
I have really enjoyed your story so far and I was surprised you didn't take the easy way out to make Naruto super strong super fast which I really enjoyed. The style you did Naruto's personality is great so far and I am really digging how he does his battles and how he reacts to everyone around him. Also I was really happy to see him not in Team 7 cause I never understood why he was put into a team of people who either hated him or as in Inu's place not teach him anything even though he knew he had the 9 tails in him. Also great work on how you did Jiraya cause damn is it nice to see him actually acting like a sensi instead of ignoring everything, I really couldn't believe how crappy he trained Naruto in canon. I still can't wait to see how you end up doing things since so far you have did them so differently then what everyone else does, Also I hope you don't do the Invasion and just have the exams happened cause it would be awesome just to see that instead of the snake screwing it all up. Also I bet I aint the only one who looks forward to seeing Naruto meet his fellow and last clan member to see what happens, I am hoping them meeting changes them both and they both find some source of family from one of another cause they both need it if you ask me. Well thank you for posting your story so people can read it and I look forward to your future works.
| ShadowFoxKage chapter 5 . 7/30/2012
I'm surprised there hasn't been a Kenjutsu wielder to help with Naruto's training since he apparently doesn't have any Kaguya scrolls for their taijutsu dances.
| 917brat chapter 6 . 5/2/2011
this is really great please keep it up because I really like this story and am eager to know what is going to happen next.
| ZamielRaizunto chapter 6 . 9/28/2010
Really good story so far and you're right about Oto not getting a lot of scrren time since after the Sasuke Retrieval they vanish except for fillers. On the subjects of Kaguyas is Kimmimaro still going to be in it and is he going to meet Naruto? YUgito-wise she could be on a team that is doind a diplomtic mission to Konoha and be an ambassador for Kumo to Konoha for either another peace treaty or an alliance.
PM me back on what you think of the idea if you like it or not.
| Pyro-Wolf16 chapter 6 . 8/12/2010
Awesome story, like how you've made the sharingan not the 'ultimate fighting weapon'
I mean seriously even someone with no skill what so ever could use the Mangekyo to kill a high level shinobi, either with Tsukyomi or Ameratsu (I have no idea how to spell either of them and too lazy to google.)
| chaos nutter chapter 6 . 6/23/2010
hey awesome story so far. just wondering though, is this ever going to be continued? its the best dead bone pulse Naruto fic i have read and it would be a shame to leave it hanging where it is right now
| ShiroFlake chapter 6 . 3/29/2010
Awesome job !
Please hurry up with next chapter.
| bleacher chapter 6 . 12/13/2009
sweet a kaguya naruto havent read something like this before very interesting
| kin-kinna chapter 6 . 12/3/2009
| shadan chapter 6 . 11/9/2009
Kurenai would never leave her own student to train someone else's student, nobody would, espescially if they aren't fighting in the Exams. If you don't want Kurenai there, at least make it into a believable excuse, like a mission or illness. Training Sakura (who will always be useless) just isn't good, and I hate her.
The Sharingan is powerful, and was the reason why the Uchihas were so dangerous, though their clan are all idiots (except Itachi). I espescially hate Sasuke. But it does have weaknesses, I believe genjutsus to affect their sense of smell, hearing and touch will still work, just not on their sight. Also, it takes a lot of chakra.
Reading your story, it seems you don't have much knowledge on the abilities of people, you can search them on ...
Also, Sound was only 1 attack because they were pretty much dead after...and after that it is Konoha trying to find Sound.
| shadan chapter 5 . 11/9/2009
Again, you don't seem to be able to write fight scenes.
Firstly, Sakura wouldn't never even faze Temari (who I hope Naruto is paired with). Even if she threw kunais with explosive notes, it would go back to her, and kill her.
Explosive notes cannot break Kaguya bones, or pierce it for that matter. Might be able to if you use wind chakra though.
Sasuke would never beat Kankurou without jutsus...and you quite obviously don't know the attacks of Kankurou's puppets. They have things like poison gas...poisoned senbon, kunais and traps.
Shino would murder Lee, you seem to forget the Bug Clone that Shino makes. Lee attacks those, and his chakra is drained...
| shadan chapter 4 . 11/8/2009
Again, the battle seems very unbelievable, there are no tactics involved whatsoever.
And you are lowering the amount of chakra Naruto has? That's a bit stupid in my opinion, and not because he is using less shadow clones, but because other Jinchuurikis have obtained a skill from their demon, and Naruto not having one seems a bit off. Especially since, in my opinion, he has one of the worst abilities from the demons.
I also find it hard not to believe Naruto wouldn't use a Henge to buy his ninja tools, and him not carrying kunais or shurikens is a bit stupid of him. What happens if he runs out of chakra. And I not sure you can conduct wind chakra on bone.
| shadan chapter 3 . 11/8/2009
Zabuza would never be stupid enough to attack from that puddle on the path. He knows they have to cross the sea to Wave Country and he would wait there because the water would make it his domain.
I just didn't find the fights believable because of this.
| shadan chapter 2 . 11/8/2009
I am glad that Sasuke got beat since I hate him. But again, with the whole revealing their abilities thing, they are ninjas for God's sake. They don't reveal their abilities to anyone...except someone that can help them...