|Reviews for Beautiful Strangers|
| stickybluemarshmellows chapter 24 . 12/7/2011
I love your stories especialy BEAUTIFUL STRANGERS.
anyways I'm finally finished with it and I just wanted to let you know how great I thought it was.
| immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 25 . 11/21/2011
All I have to say is that while this was a good story. The plot left a lot to be desired like I don't know... how about Jacob getting arrested. He could have been arrested for multiple things... stalking, rape, assault, 4 counts of attempted murder. I feel that at the very least Edward should have pressed charges for assault. But Edward acted like a dumb ass and Bella acted like a typical abuse victim in letting the perpetrator get of scott free. Hope their consciences will be clear when he moves on to his next victim and he kills her.
| DrawnToTheNight chapter 24 . 1/11/2011
really good story
| nessa81833 chapter 25 . 12/30/2010
very good story keep it up nessa.x.x.x.
| xxStarInTheSkyxx chapter 24 . 12/30/2010
That was seriously the best FanFic i have ever read! No joke! I read this whole story instead of doing my English Essay and i don't even regret it lool! Every chapter had me gripped! Your writing is amazing and i loved your Edward and Bella 3 Alice, as usual was amazing in this story and Jacob was a excellent villain! I know it was never revealed officially only suggested but i'm glad Edward is the father! I hope you maybe write a sequel to this one day as i'd love to read the rest of their story?
AMAAAZIIIING ! :D:D
| JhadaLove chapter 25 . 12/15/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL. AND PLEASE MAKE THE BABY EDWARD'S.
| MentallyInspired chapter 3 . 9/23/2010
This is SO good! I HATE Jacob, I think he's a chihuahua at heart :P lol amazing story line! :D
| Silver moonlight river chapter 24 . 7/3/2010
Awesome story :)
| Kimi Lowe chapter 24 . 2/25/2010
Love the story..
| Shin23 chapter 21 . 2/24/2010
they do need to move. Just saying. Luv your story!
| PrimaDonnaKate chapter 24 . 2/18/2010
Good story, but no offense your grammar is terrible. You said in this chapter something along the lines of ' its wrapped around the babies neck' BABIES implies more than one baby like: the cows, or the desks. Baby's with an 's means belonging to the baby. So it should be, ' wrapped around the baby's neck.' Also a few chapters ago in your A/N you said 'the babies comming.' Again that implies more than one child. 's can also mean 'is' so 'the baby's (the baby is) comming.' If you need a beta let me know I'll do it.
| BOOKWORMmunchies chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
| monstersandlostboys chapter 3 . 1/19/2010
Mmhm. I knew I hate Jake. -shakes head-
| belalicious chapter 14 . 12/26/2009
i bet you that the cotton swabs weren't edward's dna! Favorite story so far!
| AnthonyMasen chapter 27 . 12/25/2009
I think you should publish it's a good opportunity.
I got a few name suggestions for Alice and Emmett's character.
Amy,Justine,Keagan,Lindsey,Greta for Alice
Terrence,Frank,Vance,Cale,Parker, for Emmett