|Reviews for Desperation|
| Isabelle777 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
| bellaandedward chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
im and edward fan and i think it was great but make more edward and bella belong edward should find out
| its-rpattz-baby chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Wow, i was in the mood for a Bella and Jasper fic and then came across this one shot. As soon as i noticed it was smutty, i was clicking that thing, desperate to start reading and wow... you write great lemons, that was really hot. Loved it!
| Sparrow's Lassie chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
I haven't read much on Jasper and Bella other than Visceral. This was really intense! LOL Loved it!
| Emily chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Yes I more then like it.;P
| Madmum chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
OMG! I want this Jasper! Right now!
This is a sexy read. Thx.
| charcoalcanary chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
The emotion coursing through her veins would be incredible! I'm jealous. This was Jasper as he should be. A little sneaky, a lot sexy, as well as caring.
Thanks for sharing.
| SOFisticated1 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Like it? that ooc was such a turn-on! but my head it still wondering about Alice and Edward, lol. whateva! i loved it.
| SFJ0813 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
i luv this. this is fuckin hot. glad that you didn't make bella out to be the 'iwannatakeitslow' girl cuz we all know bella aint as innocent as she portrays.
| Vanilla87 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
That was very good one-shot :)
| Nyomixx chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Great lemon. Tastefully done and considering it's with Jasper... I still want more! He He He. Great job.
| lizzy-sarah'-teampaul chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
wow. hot. ;) i like this jasper.
| ChefJayla chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
i love when jasper uses his power like that. cute story.
| tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Holy bajeebus! That was so hawt! Rough, hard Jasper sex? *SWON*
Wow, Edward who? Hahaha!
| SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
OH. MY. GAWD. That was...WHEW! How in the world will Jasper keep *that* from Edward? Mercy! Butter my butt and call me a biscuit!