Reviews for Desperation
Sparrow's Lassie chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
I haven't read much on Jasper and Bella other than Visceral. This was really intense! LOL Loved it!

Joan
Emily chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Yes I more then like it.;P
Madmum chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
OMG! I want this Jasper! Right now!

This is a sexy read. Thx.
charcoalcanary chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
The emotion coursing through her veins would be incredible! I'm jealous. This was Jasper as he should be. A little sneaky, a lot sexy, as well as caring.
Thanks for sharing.
SOFisticated1 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Like it? that ooc was such a turn-on! but my head it still wondering about Alice and Edward, lol. whateva! i loved it.
SFJ0813 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
i luv this. this is fuckin hot. glad that you didn't make bella out to be the 'iwannatakeitslow' girl cuz we all know bella aint as innocent as she portrays.
Vanilla87 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
That was very good one-shot :)
Nyomixx chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Great lemon. Tastefully done and considering it's with Jasper... I still want more! He He He. Great job.
lizzy-sarah'-teampaul chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
wow. hot. ;) i like this jasper.
ChefJayla chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
i love when jasper uses his power like that. cute story.
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Holy bajeebus! That was so hawt! Rough, hard Jasper sex? *SWON*

Wow, Edward who? Hahaha!

*fans self*
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
OH. MY. GAWD. That was...WHEW! How in the world will Jasper keep *that* from Edward? Mercy! Butter my butt and call me a biscuit!
pill0wbiter chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
wow. Well it looks like that method certainly got the job done.
IOnlyDateEmpaths chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Om nom nom... I wish Jasper was real - Id let him test his control on me any day! I thought you were going to stop before it became a full on lemon; do your readers a favour and NEVER do that!
anna chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
OMG! DAYUM tht was HAWT ;) loved it!
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