Reviews for Desperation
Trinity Skye McArran chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
I love you. You should do a whole story on Bella and Jasper! Behind Edwards back! I am totally team Jasper ever since Twilight came out! I would love u 4ever if you did a story with Jasper and Bella with LOTS of lemons! I have some suggestions:first I think people would like for u to describe the size and general appearence of, shall we say, the cullen "anatomy"! I also think you should make more scenes with blow jobs. Maybe more facial expressions during explicit scenes! Ur writing is amazing! I humbly prostrate myself b4 ur glowing skills! Tehehehehe!
EveFidelius chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
That's one way to do it! Hehe
joayla chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Loved it anything were jazz gets his pants down is worth a read !
allyandmax chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
whoa hott
Beautiful-Liar13 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
loved it
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Oh, seriously yum.

Yum, yum, YUM!

Fun and flirty and dirty and completely without the weight of repercussions.

This was FUN!
frlarsson chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Loved this one-shot! )

best wishes, Linda
mybutterflygirl chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Wow! Hot, hot, hot! Loved it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
PencilComet chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Whew! *fans self with hands* That was hot.
SomeoneDELETEthisACCOUNT chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
that was sexy and hot! i loved it ;)
mssmith chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Holyshit! that was hot! Thanks!
roon0 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
Very sexy!
acirelemagne chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
whew. i mean, just, whew! loved this so much! great lemon!
Chelsie Whitlock chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
So effing hot! You really know how to leave a girl wanting more! I love how plausible this was, and how it fit neatly into cannon without being off the wall. I think Jasper and Bella are just too hot for words.
HPFangirl71 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
I totally loved this bit of Jasperella smut! Great story!
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