Reviews for Desperation
pill0wbiter chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
wow. Well it looks like that method certainly got the job done.
IOnlyDateEmpaths chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Om nom nom... I wish Jasper was real - Id let him test his control on me any day! I thought you were going to stop before it became a full on lemon; do your readers a favour and NEVER do that!
anna chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
OMG! DAYUM tht was HAWT ;) loved it!
Christina Fey chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Of course I loved it silly. That's how a Bella/Jasper is suppose to be written.

~Jessi C.
lola luv edward chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
are you going to finsh it if you are not please let me do for you
TwiCharmed chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
very nice. just like bella, sometimes you gotta forget about edward and just...feel...
jennyap chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
H - O - T !
Iceblondie chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
WOW that was amazingly Fing HOT.
IreadUwrite chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Good smut!
Trinity Skye McArran chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
~ I love you. You should do a whole story on Bella and Jasper! Behind Edwards back! I am totally team Jasper ever since Twilight came out! I would love u 4ever if you did a story with Jasper and Bella with LOTS of lemons! I have some suggestions:first I think people would like for u to describe the size and general appearence of, shall we say, the cullen "anatomy"! I also think you should make more scenes with blow jobs. Maybe more facial expressions during explicit scenes! Ur writing is amazing! I humbly prostrate myself b4 ur glowing skills! Tehehehehe!~
EveFidelius chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
That's one way to do it! Hehe
joayla chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Loved it anything were jazz gets his pants down is worth a read !
allyandmax chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
whoa hott
Beautiful-Liar13 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
loved it
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Oh, seriously yum.

Yum, yum, YUM!

Fun and flirty and dirty and completely without the weight of repercussions.

This was FUN!
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