Reviews for Border of Taboo
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 19 . 12/9/2017
Ooh the plot thickens, great twists and surprises in this chaotet.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 18 . 12/9/2017
I loved the section of Genesis' backstory, very emotional I really do feel for him! Also the hug is one of my favorite Aeriseph moments ever, I love that line about her being insolent. Major feels! And shock drama at the last section, so they know!
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 17 . 12/8/2017
Genesis! Loving the drama and tge heartwrenching.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 16 . 10/30/2017
The triangle finally clicks, I love me some Seneris!
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 15 . 10/30/2017
So shocking and evil, poor Hegemony! I love how you step up the stakes for all the chatacters with every chapter of Border of taboo. Gripping to read.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 14 . 10/28/2017
I love this story so much, nice to have such emotional depth and heartstring pulling moments to contrast the fabulous action too, just like in the games snd compilation. I like how Gen and Aeris are realusing they have deeper common ground than they originally imagined.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 13 . 10/27/2017
I love this chase scene and the drama! Aeris is having such an adventure here, so much danger. It's intriguing to think of Sephiroth in such a vulnerable position, I do so love the three of them together dynamic and their banter as well.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 12 . 10/27/2017
The rise and the fall, I love how you step everything up in this chapter! The dynamics of all the relationships are exhiliarating, you write them all so spot on and multidimensional.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 11 . 10/27/2017
Ooooh the delicious torture of the buildup! I really feel for all of them but particularly Aeris stuck in their web of games, I love that paragraph "maybe this was a stupid thing to say.." How she is longing to trust him and then she realises in disappointment that she can't. She thinks she is way out of her depth on the whole situatuon but actually she holds more cards than she knows. Thank you for writing!
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 10 . 10/25/2017
I completely forgot about this chapter! The plot thickens, I lobe how you keep Genesis so cunning and machiavellian even when he's vulnerable.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 9 . 10/25/2017
I like how you showed us Hegemony's life outside of the bee, and the theme of both her and Aeris catching feelings for the things they aren't supposed to care for but are still drawn to (Upperworld and Sephiroth) and also the necklaces they both recieved and what they do with them in this chapter. You wrote some beautiful images in this chapter as well, particularly the end part where Aeris rips the poster down! Your story structure is exciting and so believable, I would love to be able to write fanfiction like this someday!
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 8 . 10/24/2017
OMG I could actually kill him for this! So heartbreaking the way he tries to justify what he did is so disgusting and the tea WTF? He has a lot to learn! Poor Aeris, I can understand her delirium after that trauma and her defiance is breathtaking, "I had him," the way she laughs etc. Gripping writing, you make it all so real!
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 7 . 10/24/2017
I find this chapter so touching, I love how you write Aeris' emotions like i'm actually feeling them myself. It's so raw and moving how she is determined to prove Sephiroth wrong but then she gets so absorbed with her compassion for the patients that she forgets all about that until he's there and then she gets scared as it dawns on her how dangerous her idea was. Aeris is so brave and loving and one hell of an awesome human being that she would put herself at risk like that, she chastises herself when she gets caught and realises she could lose everything, but her convictions were so powerful that it didn't occur to her before embarking on this mission! I really believe that all of this could have happened in the canon.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 6 . 10/20/2017
Aaaah sh** just got real! Sephiroth can be such an a**hole but you write him so believably! I love how you raised the stakes here with events, also tragic opening.
Dangerous Fantasy chapter 5 . 10/20/2017
I like how you added in the voices she hears, and the twist of Genesis hiring them for Rufus' party-I forgot it was Genesis! The plot thickens suspensefully.
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