Reviews for All Planned Out
Gale chapter 1 . 4/23
I really like this! While pronouns are a good thing, They were used in excess. For example "...SHE knew that He knew that SHE has adjusted to HIS new study habits..." Its kinda hard to focus on the world when I must remember to whom you are referring. Of course Its James and Lilly, but it was one thing I figured you wanted to know! Keep writing because this was very well written! :)
Natalia chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Cutest thing ever!
OtherwiseKnownAsJules chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Soo cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
I liked it, PLEASE write their dates. It would be awesome. Lovely writing by the way!
ilovetoread38 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Absolutely fantastic! This is why they're my favorite pairing!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Cute! :D
et chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
i really hope your enjoying uni and the chapter is amazing
Border Terrier chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
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MissEMT chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
so sweet! James' romantic-ness had me grinning!
sophieranier14 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
That was beautiful! Not to mention very in character for James!
IamTiffany chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Very cute and well written!
quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Um, amazing! I love how confident he is; it reminds me of my own boyfriend. If only he were a wizard... haha. Anyway, good story! Definitely different than most, which is good. Although, it would be really cool to see all those dates play out...
loveprongs chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
phwoaaaah

i am so confused.

had i been in Lily's shoes i would've just kissed him as soon as he came up to me cause i wouldn't be able to get that.

my brain hurts

hahha :)

i love it
lilylou101 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
that was very sweet!i liked it:-)
pigckle8 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
omg i love this one shot! it's so cutee! i love lily and james [:
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